The only quibble I have is that, as of when the youngsters went trick-or-treating, Belldandy hadn't arrived at the party yet. That should be phrased along the lines of Belldandy having promised to show up (maybe with a comment about Belldandy always keeping her promises).
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Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
- unknown
Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
- unknown