I know I've seen this or an earlier draft before, but still good stuff. One small thing, though: "kibbutz" = Israeli commune. You want "kibbitz", and even then it's not quite the right word -- it basically means to stick your nose in where it's not wanted and give unneeded advice or commentary. Or maybe it is the right word, depending on how those forum discussions run. <grin>
-- Bob
I have been Roland, Beowulf, Achilles, Gilgamesh, Clark Kent, Mary Sue, DJ Croft, Skysaber. I have been
called a hundred names and will be called a thousand more before the sun grows dim and cold....
I have been Roland, Beowulf, Achilles, Gilgamesh, Clark Kent, Mary Sue, DJ Croft, Skysaber. I have been
called a hundred names and will be called a thousand more before the sun grows dim and cold....