...Thanks, but... now that I'm a little less fried, I went in and handled a lot that you let pass, which is kind of what I was asking someone to do for me. In short, what I just spent about half an hour doing was, and I quote my edit summary: "fix grammar, fix run-on sentences, fix multiple cases of bizarre and nonstandard usage, deleted redundant/irrelevant details, inserted *many* missing words; commented out incomplete sentence with mod note, fix typos, added missing pucntuation, added xrefs, fixed random capitalization, fixed numerous style errors, commented out entries which are Word Salad".
-- Bob
I have been Roland, Beowulf, Achilles, Gilgamesh, Clark Kent, Mary Sue, DJ Croft, Skysaber. I have been
called a hundred names and will be called a thousand more before the sun grows dim and cold....
I have been Roland, Beowulf, Achilles, Gilgamesh, Clark Kent, Mary Sue, DJ Croft, Skysaber. I have been
called a hundred names and will be called a thousand more before the sun grows dim and cold....