[OOC][PLOT][ARC 1] Planning for Season 1 - The Retcon

[Bob Schroeck]

I know it's on the wiki so the obvious answer probably applies, but... do you mind edits by other folks? I spotted some markup stuff and my ATT reflexes were powerful strong...

EDIT: And I so want to make this edit:

(and no, you're not dead (unless you were already dead before you came here -- and even then, you might be alive now. Consult your doctor to find out if resurrection is right for you)).

EDIT 2: Okay, just finished reading this iteration. I see several places where asterisks should be turned into italics, and just a couple spots where the syntax is a little tangled and could use untangling, but otherwise it looks great!

Oh, and I know the bit above about consulting your doctor is not something Yomi might write. But the "even then", I think, is.