Actually it turns out I’m going to write a story using Kestrel (and HAL) next. I’m planning on joining the first three stories I wrote together into one longer story. The first one had almost no changes besides five year old typos, the second one needed a little change to accommodate things learned during my SI’s job interview. The third, well, it’s getting expanded quite a bit. One new scene, reordering existing scenes, a couple of emails, and a bunch of telling without showing. Because I’m not planning to do too many more first-person stories, I figure a little more of my SI voice at the beginning is probably for the best.
"Kitto daijoubu da yo." - Sakura Kinomoto