Arg, dammit, I'm remembering noticing a continuity error (someone does something for the first time twice) but not what or who or when, just that it was across two posts.
No, wait, it's when MC uses his invisibility "on two people for the first time" after hiding all the other Senshi while Usagi met Dark General Whichever earlier. It would still count as a first as the two of them are moving around doing things vs the group having been stationary, but reads like the earlier incident was forgotten at first glance.
With that being the only thing I have to complain about, it's safe to say I like the fic overall and think it's good
No, wait, it's when MC uses his invisibility "on two people for the first time" after hiding all the other Senshi while Usagi met Dark General Whichever earlier. It would still count as a first as the two of them are moving around doing things vs the group having been stationary, but reads like the earlier incident was forgotten at first glance.
With that being the only thing I have to complain about, it's safe to say I like the fic overall and think it's good
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‎noli esse culus
‎noli esse culus