And there we go - it's still pretty anemic compared to what it should be but otherwise, it's vastly improved from its previous state, and that much closer to passing muster as a "neutral" article. I've a lot more to do for my part in this, currently - poring through the forum I linked in the talk page discussion, for example.
Also Bob, check your PMs on here when you have the chance.
Also Bob, check your PMs on here when you have the chance.