Dartz Wrote:Right. I can add that to the working document. I hope you don't mind if I adjust the opening just a little bit to fit a few things?Feel free to do whatever you need to do for the story.
Dartz Wrote:Because that is a nice moment between the two.... and exactly why I didn't write it because it's absolutely what I didn't think would happen.Meg's can always use another cook, or a session performer on the restaurant's stage. (Tuesday is "amateur night"...)
Which makes me start to wonder if Stellvia could use a reasonably decent cook, or occasional session musician? It's definitely a healthier emotional environment for him to be in with more people coming and going to interact with.... and it's central enough to places he'd want to go, especially if he has the Judy to skip around Cislunar space.
Which gives me a few options now....
Oh, yes... No matter how informal everyone else gets in their conversations, Yayoi will continue to call Shinji "Ikari-san" until he gives her permission to use his given name.
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Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."
- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012