Thanks for compiling this - now we know what needs to be edited...
As for e-mail addresses... Yayoi's never seen Top Gun. Her personality is more a "den mother" than a "maverick", so even if she had seen the movie, she wouldn't have picked Tom Cruise's callsign... and Noah wouldn't force it on her no matter how appropriate it is. Yayoi's mail goes to "mamabear@stellvia.lib".
Yoriko's address is good - it fits her.
Should it come up later in the story, Kohran's addresses are "redlad@stellvia.lib"; she isn't comfortable drawing attention to herself, so she just uses her name... which draws attention to her.
-Rob Kelk
"Read Or Die: not so much a title as a way of life." - Justin Palmer, 6 June 2007
--
Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."
- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012
As for e-mail addresses... Yayoi's never seen Top Gun. Her personality is more a "den mother" than a "maverick", so even if she had seen the movie, she wouldn't have picked Tom Cruise's callsign... and Noah wouldn't force it on her no matter how appropriate it is. Yayoi's mail goes to "mamabear@stellvia.lib".
Yoriko's address is good - it fits her.
Should it come up later in the story, Kohran's addresses are "redlad@stellvia.lib"; she isn't comfortable drawing attention to herself, so she just uses her name... which draws attention to her.
-Rob Kelk
"Read Or Die: not so much a title as a way of life." - Justin Palmer, 6 June 2007
--
Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."
- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012