Ye gods, 122pp? I didn't think we were that wordy!
Anyway, on with some constructive criticism: If this is something you want to give to gamers, or even just a "Writer's Bible" to stick on the Fenspace page, it needs some significant trimming.
In that spirit, here's a theoretical revise outline to work with:
1: Introduction
1.1: The "Welcome to Fenspace" sticky from the board.
1.2: Meta rules.
2: The Setting In General
2.1: Timeline (minus future parts)
2.2: Places
2.3: Factions
2.3.1: Organizations
2.4: Glossary
3: People & Things
3.1: Noteworthy Fen
3.1.1-x: No more than half a dozen of the major players in Fenspace, not the entire cast of characters. By "major players" I mean active PCs or high-level NPCs like Haruhi.
3.2: Noteworthy Fenships
3.2.1-x: Again, a selection of the more impressive objects in the Fenspace fleet. My personal shortlist would be the Jet Car, Inelegant Truth, Ptichka (o ego!), Miranda, Hephaestus, Grover's Corners, Stellvia & the Island.
4: Miscellaneous
4.1-x: The stuff already in the Other Information heading not already covered here.
5: Appendix 1 - Complete Cast (seperate PDF file)
5.1: All the Fenspace bios currently posted.
6: Appendix 2 - Complete Ship Registry (seperate PDF file)
6.1: All the Fenspace ships currently posted.
Thoughts?---
Mr. Fnord
http://fnord.sandwich.net/
http://www.jihad.net/
Mr. Fnord interdimensional man of mystery
FenWiki - Your One-Stop Shop for Fenspace Information
"I. Drink. Your. NERDRAGE!"
Anyway, on with some constructive criticism: If this is something you want to give to gamers, or even just a "Writer's Bible" to stick on the Fenspace page, it needs some significant trimming.
In that spirit, here's a theoretical revise outline to work with:
1: Introduction
1.1: The "Welcome to Fenspace" sticky from the board.
1.2: Meta rules.
2: The Setting In General
2.1: Timeline (minus future parts)
2.2: Places
2.3: Factions
2.3.1: Organizations
2.4: Glossary
3: People & Things
3.1: Noteworthy Fen
3.1.1-x: No more than half a dozen of the major players in Fenspace, not the entire cast of characters. By "major players" I mean active PCs or high-level NPCs like Haruhi.
3.2: Noteworthy Fenships
3.2.1-x: Again, a selection of the more impressive objects in the Fenspace fleet. My personal shortlist would be the Jet Car, Inelegant Truth, Ptichka (o ego!), Miranda, Hephaestus, Grover's Corners, Stellvia & the Island.
4: Miscellaneous
4.1-x: The stuff already in the Other Information heading not already covered here.
5: Appendix 1 - Complete Cast (seperate PDF file)
5.1: All the Fenspace bios currently posted.
6: Appendix 2 - Complete Ship Registry (seperate PDF file)
6.1: All the Fenspace ships currently posted.
Thoughts?---
Mr. Fnord
http://fnord.sandwich.net/
http://www.jihad.net/
Mr. Fnord interdimensional man of mystery
FenWiki - Your One-Stop Shop for Fenspace Information
"I. Drink. Your. NERDRAGE!"