Just a couple typo-like things. Neil Blackwell's first name isn't Fenoir, that was just my idea of a joke Fenspace, film noir... get it? Ha ha! And Toni's last name isn't Gunderson, she doesn't have one, or rather she hasn't given one to anybody. Other than that, I gotta agree on the "wow, we wrote that much background?" cuz it doesn't seem like it but that's a lot. Good show us. ---------------
-Jon
Leo (July 23-Aug. 22)
The population density of Wyoming is very low, but that doesn't mean the people there aren't also out to kill you.
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Jon
"And that must have caused my dad's brain to break in half, replaced by a purely mechanical engine of revenge!"
-Jon
Leo (July 23-Aug. 22)
The population density of Wyoming is very low, but that doesn't mean the people there aren't also out to kill you.
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Jon
"And that must have caused my dad's brain to break in half, replaced by a purely mechanical engine of revenge!"