Thing one: Thanks. Still hammering, and I don't know how the schedule will hold up. The BBI and WW1 may just be in the background for now.
Thing two: This I figured would the big thing. I will be working further on this part. I'm at work, so I was just dashing it off today. The thing is, these are older fen; folks who actually have jobs in the Really, Real World (Blackstone's term for the 'Dane. He's a little less condescending of normal folks than a lot of the younger fen.). They would be putting in a lot more work to restore the bus than just throwing things together in a big pot and hoping it comes out alright. I'll go back and fiddle with it.
Thing three: Quirks are still in development. Like I said, this is all rough. As for the ratgirl, it's more a mental thing than a physical. It was meant to be something of a teaser. Wendy's immediate biomod is taking the actual transgender medical procedure and ... well, fixing it. A small bit of SI on my part, as my roommate is currently in the middle of gender hormone therapy, and I would make it easier for her if I could, at least physically (she's gotta do the psychological bit herself). As for quirks, I think that trading testosterone for estrogen and all the issues therein is quirky enough.
Thing four: Handwavium has been described several times as nanotech goo. Or at least in a similar fashion. Nanotech, in the popular meme, very often has the secondary function of "refuel and reproduce." Who's to say that a small amount of 'wavium, left alone in for a period of time, doesn't increase in quantity? But, I see I left that out. Editing will be required.
Thanks for the criticism. I will take it into account in the next draft.Ebony the Black Dragon
Senior Editor, Living Room Games
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Ebony the Black Dragon
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"Good night, and may the Good Lord take a Viking to you."
Thing two: This I figured would the big thing. I will be working further on this part. I'm at work, so I was just dashing it off today. The thing is, these are older fen; folks who actually have jobs in the Really, Real World (Blackstone's term for the 'Dane. He's a little less condescending of normal folks than a lot of the younger fen.). They would be putting in a lot more work to restore the bus than just throwing things together in a big pot and hoping it comes out alright. I'll go back and fiddle with it.
Thing three: Quirks are still in development. Like I said, this is all rough. As for the ratgirl, it's more a mental thing than a physical. It was meant to be something of a teaser. Wendy's immediate biomod is taking the actual transgender medical procedure and ... well, fixing it. A small bit of SI on my part, as my roommate is currently in the middle of gender hormone therapy, and I would make it easier for her if I could, at least physically (she's gotta do the psychological bit herself). As for quirks, I think that trading testosterone for estrogen and all the issues therein is quirky enough.
Thing four: Handwavium has been described several times as nanotech goo. Or at least in a similar fashion. Nanotech, in the popular meme, very often has the secondary function of "refuel and reproduce." Who's to say that a small amount of 'wavium, left alone in for a period of time, doesn't increase in quantity? But, I see I left that out. Editing will be required.
Thanks for the criticism. I will take it into account in the next draft.Ebony the Black Dragon
Senior Editor, Living Room Games
http://www.lrgames.com
Ebony the Black Dragon
http://ebony14.livejournal.com
"Good night, and may the Good Lord take a Viking to you."