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[Story][RFC --PLEASE!!!]The Gauntlet
 
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Right so... I'll try something. Even if it might not be exactly what you want.

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The mill at Ford's garage had been waiting patiently for an operator to change out a tool for nearly 20 minutes.

"Hey Jet," Ford called out. "Did you see this yet?"

"What?"

"AC on the Gauntlet. I managed to get the neighbour's stream,"

She sounded inordinately pleased with herself for guessing that the neighbour's password was, well, 'password'. For a mechanic, it felt like the greatest, most nefarious hack in the world.

Jet gave her a wan smile. "Not right now," she said in a tone that clearly meant 'not fucking ever'.

Ford watched another team go to pieces... yes that was a dirty euphemism.... It was also blackly funny. She turned back to Jet and saw the strangest look in her partner's eyes, as if she'd fallen right back into herself for a moment.

"Jet?"

She snapped clean out of it "What?"

"....nothing." Ford said after a moment's thought. Again.

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Not sure if I got that right.... trying to hint at Jet getting a little 'flashbacky' without outright saying it, and trying not to be too cliché.
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