[Story][Season 2]The gas station (finished)

[Ace Dreamer]

All looks good, very little to criticize.

“Damned, I think everyone of us will be spoiled for future missions." Should be 'every one'.

“and the catgirl that was found sleeping with you on the couch said it had been also very tired and didn’t noticed you were no catgirl.” Should that be 'she' not 'it'? Would "you weren't a catgirl" read better?

“did someone found the missing ice anchor?” Should be 'find'.

"Maybe they accidently put it in the cargo for our ships second turn?” I'm unsure what 'second turn' means.

"Somewhere, in an empty supply modules on Jenga was a strange meeting happening" Should that be "module on Jenga a strange meeting was happening"?

"It was a selfish thing to keep the work for themselves, but there were not all that bad." Should be "but they were"?

"such a good reading on this anchors" Should be "this anchor", or "these anchors".

"this were the place for their spare parts?" Should be "was the place", I think.

OK, I did another pass and found a few minor bits.
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"It is the business of the future to be dangerous" - Hawkwind