Hey, this is a personal nitpick, and it's your character after all, but...
What's with the ambiguous 'Lie'?
I know you're doing an overhaul but... well, I like the design of Mal as a SMOF without 'mods. About as normal as can be, for a Fen, but still very much a powerful individual. And, if there's one thing I've learned, it's that simple's best, most of the time. Unless you have a serious plan/plot-point about the 'mod, I'd recomend dropping it. But hey, you're the boss...
What's with the ambiguous 'Lie'?
I know you're doing an overhaul but... well, I like the design of Mal as a SMOF without 'mods. About as normal as can be, for a Fen, but still very much a powerful individual. And, if there's one thing I've learned, it's that simple's best, most of the time. Unless you have a serious plan/plot-point about the 'mod, I'd recomend dropping it. But hey, you're the boss...