Oh, fun installment. There appear to be a couple spellchecker mistakes -- the wrong "right" spelling -- but the only thing other those that I think really needs fixing is this clumsy sentence:
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
Quote:We’re more likely some group of people who have too much time on their hands’ attempt at fanfiction.I'd recast it as
Quote:We’re more likely fanfiction by some group of people who have too much time on their hands.-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.