I hope it was a good "BWA?". I'm slightly concerned the Circle bit is too disjointed. I originally had a bit with Superball ruminating on home visits being a first, even though his address is on record with Freedom Corps, etc, etc... basically linkage material, but I cut it for pacing reasons.
Unfortunately, it does make the transition rather sudden. Which might be good or bad; the hit of pure irrelevance is prolly a good thing coming after all the drama of the earlier sections, but...I dunno.
And does the Circle connection seem too odd? Too much of an added complication? I have to say, that's pretty much it for plot points, though. From now on, it's all downhill until the resolution. Heading towards explanations, not new weirdness.
-- Acyl
Unfortunately, it does make the transition rather sudden. Which might be good or bad; the hit of pure irrelevance is prolly a good thing coming after all the drama of the earlier sections, but...I dunno.
And does the Circle connection seem too odd? Too much of an added complication? I have to say, that's pretty much it for plot points, though. From now on, it's all downhill until the resolution. Heading towards explanations, not new weirdness.
-- Acyl