Nice bit Bob. 2 things though threw me a bit.
first, a typo
Raye just blew a raspberry before taking another bite of the horribly nutated cheesesteak she'd been duped into buying
Looks like you mistyped 'mutated'.
the other was the New Brunswick mention. I'm Canadian, so the first New Brunswick that comes to mind is the province. 8P
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"I've always wanted to be somebody, but I should have been more specific." - George Carlin
first, a typo
Raye just blew a raspberry before taking another bite of the horribly nutated cheesesteak she'd been duped into buying
Looks like you mistyped 'mutated'.
the other was the New Brunswick mention. I'm Canadian, so the first New Brunswick that comes to mind is the province. 8P
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"I've always wanted to be somebody, but I should have been more specific." - George Carlin