After a little tweaking based on the comments I got a few weeks back, I've published my arc (tagged as "Looking for feedback" since I'm not 100% satisfied with it, but satisfied enough...)
Anyway, I'd be very grateful if folks would give it a play and comment/rate it, please.
Thank you.
(ETA: I tweaked the arc a little this morning, and the number changed when I saved it. Please note the new number in the threat title.)
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
Anyway, I'd be very grateful if folks would give it a play and comment/rate it, please.
Thank you.
(ETA: I tweaked the arc a little this morning, and the number changed when I saved it. Please note the new number in the threat title.)
-- Bob
---------
Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.