You know you want it, baby.

[Bob Schroeck]

M Fnord wrote:

---

* Doug has a habit of picking up strays.

You have no idea. 

M Fnord wrote:

---

* Damn, Department of Mysteries is hardcore, yo.

Well, if you were protecting the only clue to the nature of a seismic shift in the destiny of Wizarding Britain from a two-bit government functionary who's more interested in her own personal power than anything else, wouldn't you be? 

M Fnord wrote:

---

* Edgecombe's out? That's a spanner in the canon I don't think I've seen before...

And not in my original plans, either... it just happened in the writing, most fortuitously as well because my plans for the DA kind of disposed of the need for her and I had no idea up until that moment what to do with her.

M Fnord wrote:

---

* I don't think I've mentioned this before, but I really like the
"Letters from Draco" wrapper as a concept. Draco's POV as an antagonist
adds some depth to a story that might otherwise be 100% shenanigans.

That's turning out to be a common comment, even from prereaders.  Again, it originated kind of as an accident, but I'm really liking what it lets me do.

M Fnord wrote:

---

A+ would read again looking forward to reading the next chapter before GRRM finishes ASOIAF.

You see the counter for chapter 5 going up, don't you? 
-- Bob
---------
Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.