Okay folks! Here we are, new material to fill things in and extend the timeline a bit so Benjamin's emotional metldown and subsequent acceptance as adoptive family feels more realistic.
Please critique. I need to know how well this works and not just that it works.
Just the file attachment this time since I honestly don't feel like putting that many extra line breaks right now. (x_x)
It's the same name as last time, so you can just go ahead and overwrite the previous one or just rename it if you want to keep the iterations of the WIP.
Part.pdf (Size: 128.5 KB / Downloads: 14)
Please critique. I need to know how well this works and not just that it works.
Just the file attachment this time since I honestly don't feel like putting that many extra line breaks right now. (x_x)
It's the same name as last time, so you can just go ahead and overwrite the previous one or just rename it if you want to keep the iterations of the WIP.
Part.pdf (Size: 128.5 KB / Downloads: 14)