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FATE/Twilight Flicker: Split Daybreak OMAKE files
Re: the foibles of attention
#81

Temujin flinched when the thunderbolt when off. It was understandable - the spell's flash and report may not have been anywhere close to what a real lightning strike would have been like at that range, but compared to the relative darkness and quiet of the twilight battlefield it was no less stunning, and the brilliance did an excellent job of disabling his night vision.
Medusa hadn't actually been using her eyes to see anyway. The ring she'd thrown settled neatly around his neck, and a quick twist of the wrist tightened it and ensured it would stay there. She looped the chain around that hand once, twice, then set both hands together and yanked as hard as she could. Without a longer pull, it was only enough to stagger him, but by the time he'd come back on balance and slashed the links away, it was too late even to brace himself.
Servants were hard to kill. Their bodies were not organisms, as such, as much as - to be poetic - mere clay, guided by the apothesized spirit of a former human being and powered by the mana of their Masters. That lack of reliance on the delicate physical balances and processes of ordinary life did not, however, mean that they likewise lacked weak points. A limb whose joints, muscles, or connective tissues had been damaged or severed was still rendered unusable, the heart had as much to do with distributing mana as blood, and the soul, out of its own perceptions as much as anything else, still lived behind the eyes.
If Temujin had been able to see clearly, it wouldn't have worked.
He couldn't.
It did. One dagger scraped along the length of his saber in a spray of sparks, leverage and the momentum of her charge forcing it down and away out of his instinctive guard, and then the other was spearing forwards in her other hand and sliding all-too-easily between his ribs.
His eyes widened. "Next...time..." he forced out, before a wracking cough sent a trickle of blood from his mouth.
"Perhaps," she answered as it began to precede the rest of his body in dissolving away into the sort-lived greenish sparks of raw mana in open air. Then she slipped her blade free of his heart and glanced around at the rest of the battlefield.

Sorry to cut down my output like this, but it's Finals Time. ^_^;
I hope I'll be able to keep up at least one story post every couple of days, but I'll be alternating between this thread and the Mai-X thread, so it might seem like less.
No promises, though.
Ja, -n

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"Puripuri puripuri... Bang!"
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Pretty good April 1st - by ordnance11 - 04-01-2006, 06:56 PM
once more, with feeling - by Rieverre - 04-01-2006, 10:06 PM
the obligatory one ... - by Rieverre - 04-02-2006, 08:48 PM
Re: the obligatory one ... - by Valles - 04-02-2006, 09:29 PM
Re: the obligatory one ... - by ordnance11 - 04-02-2006, 09:53 PM
Fate/Plot Bunny of Dhoom! - by Guest - 04-03-2006, 01:24 AM
re:Fate/Plot Bunny of Dhoom! - by ordnance11 - 04-03-2006, 01:58 AM
Fate/Plot Bunny of Dhoom! - by Rieverre - 04-04-2006, 04:41 AM
Re: Fate/Plot Bunny of Dhoom! - by WengFook - 04-04-2006, 05:03 AM
Re: Fate/Plot Bunny of Dhoom! - by ClassicDrogn - 04-04-2006, 05:08 AM
Holy what? - by ordnance11 - 04-04-2006, 06:13 AM
Holy what? - by Rieverre - 04-05-2006, 12:12 AM
Meiun/Zairyuu Mayonaka - by Valles - 04-05-2006, 12:31 AM
tsk, giving me ideas - by Rieverre - 04-05-2006, 01:31 AM
re:tsk, giving me ideas - by ordnance11 - 04-05-2006, 03:11 AM
actually - by Rieverre - 04-05-2006, 03:34 AM
Re: actually - by WengFook - 04-05-2006, 04:01 AM
um ... no - by Rieverre - 04-05-2006, 04:11 AM
A pitchfork!! - by ordnance11 - 04-05-2006, 04:40 AM
*snicker* - by Rieverre - 04-05-2006, 04:43 AM
Re: *snicker* - by WengFook - 04-05-2006, 05:43 AM
Re: *snicker* - by ClassicDrogn - 04-06-2006, 01:21 AM
a sage and advisor - by Rieverre - 04-06-2006, 01:59 PM
RE a sage and advisor - by ordnance11 - 04-07-2006, 04:16 AM
humm - by Rieverre - 04-07-2006, 11:25 AM
Re:hummm - by ordnance11 - 04-08-2006, 02:47 AM
the _other_ obligatory Flicker - by Rieverre - 04-10-2006, 12:18 AM
re:the _other_ obligatory Flicker - by ordnance11 - 04-10-2006, 03:56 AM
Tsukihime - by ordnance11 - 04-10-2006, 07:07 AM
Shinji's treatment of Sakura - by ordnance11 - 04-10-2006, 07:16 AM
*dies laughing* - by Rieverre - 04-10-2006, 11:57 PM
Re: *dies laughing* - by ClassicDrogn - 04-11-2006, 01:35 AM
re: *dies laughing* - by ordnance11 - 04-12-2006, 06:34 AM
I know this guy from somewhere - by Rieverre - 04-12-2006, 08:36 PM
appendix to #7 - by Rieverre - 04-16-2006, 09:11 PM
re:appendix to #7 - by ordnance11 - 04-16-2006, 09:50 PM
Re: re:appendix to #7 - by WengFook - 04-17-2006, 03:35 AM
oh dear... - by katreus - 04-17-2006, 04:49 AM
One little victory - by Valles - 04-17-2006, 08:36 AM
Re: One little victory - by katreus - 04-17-2006, 09:49 AM
Re: One little victory - by Valles - 04-17-2006, 10:06 AM
Meeting - by Valles - 04-21-2006, 10:09 AM
I am the Captain of My Soul - by Rieverre - 04-21-2006, 03:10 PM
just thought of this one - by Rieverre - 04-21-2006, 03:45 PM
Sword Dancer? - by Valles - 04-22-2006, 03:41 AM
Re: Sword Dancer? - by WengFook - 04-22-2006, 04:15 AM
Re: Sword Dancer? - by Valles - 04-22-2006, 04:27 AM
For the Assasins - by ordnance11 - 04-22-2006, 05:05 AM
Re: For the Assasins - by Valles - 04-22-2006, 05:23 AM
Re: re:For the Assasins - by ordnance11 - 04-22-2006, 06:02 AM
Re: re:For the Assasins - by katreus - 04-22-2006, 06:14 AM
Throwing my omake into the ring - by ordnance11 - 04-22-2006, 08:26 AM
Minor Editsu - by Rieverre - 04-22-2006, 06:51 PM
Talking - by Valles - 04-23-2006, 01:43 AM
*evil chuckle* - by Rieverre - 04-23-2006, 03:06 AM
*VEG* - by Valles - 04-24-2006, 03:46 AM
Re: *VEG* - by katreus - 04-24-2006, 05:57 AM
birds of a feather? - by Rieverre - 04-24-2006, 11:07 AM
*preens* - by Valles - 04-24-2006, 03:11 PM
speaking of whom - by Rieverre - 04-24-2006, 04:15 PM
Who? - by Valles - 04-24-2006, 09:52 PM
Re: Who? - by katreus - 04-24-2006, 11:32 PM
Re: Who? - by WengFook - 04-25-2006, 04:16 AM
Re: Who? - by Valles - 04-25-2006, 04:32 AM
Re: Who? - by WengFook - 04-25-2006, 08:45 AM
...then dealing with them - by Valles - 04-26-2006, 01:03 AM
Thing for her... - by ordnance11 - 04-26-2006, 03:18 AM
Re: Lancer II's Situation - by DKnight54 - 04-26-2006, 03:42 AM
Versus check and mate - by Valles - 04-26-2006, 05:04 AM
watch, learn, lay an ambush? - by Rieverre - 04-26-2006, 03:14 PM
Something like that - by Valles - 04-27-2006, 01:10 AM
the foibles of attention - by Rieverre - 04-27-2006, 10:17 AM
Re: the foibles of attention - by katreus - 04-27-2006, 11:54 AM
Re: the foibles of attention - by Rieverre - 04-27-2006, 12:03 PM
Re: the foibles of attention - by Valles - 04-29-2006, 05:15 AM
Re: the foibles of attention - by katreus - 04-29-2006, 05:50 AM
Re: the foibles of attention - by WengFook - 04-29-2006, 10:06 AM
a brief change of focus - by Rieverre - 04-29-2006, 06:04 PM
of interest - by Rieverre - 05-02-2006, 04:13 PM
Re: of interest - by WengFook - 05-02-2006, 04:58 PM
Re: of interest - by katreus - 05-02-2006, 06:53 PM
teh win - by Rieverre - 05-07-2006, 04:58 PM
All might not be lost... - by ordnance11 - 05-07-2006, 06:02 PM
Worldbuilding - by Valles - 05-10-2006, 04:48 AM
Re: Worldbuilding - by Rieverre - 05-10-2006, 08:20 AM
I passed! Well, mostly. - by Valles - 05-12-2006, 04:43 AM
congrats, then - by Rieverre - 05-12-2006, 01:56 PM
Thanks! I'm a happy monkey right now - by Valles - 05-14-2006, 04:07 AM
welcome to the killing grounds ... - by Rieverre - 05-15-2006, 05:31 PM
Measurements - by DKnight54 - 05-16-2006, 02:44 PM
Re: Measurements - by Valles - 05-16-2006, 03:34 PM
watch to learn - by Rieverre - 05-16-2006, 04:59 PM
Re: watch to learn - by katreus - 05-18-2006, 11:42 AM
Re: watch to learn - by Valles - 05-21-2006, 03:46 AM
Re: watch to learn - by katreus - 05-21-2006, 04:01 AM
against king and country - by Rieverre - 05-22-2006, 09:08 PM
Major big time boggle - by ordnance11 - 05-22-2006, 11:27 PM
Learn to watch - by Valles - 06-27-2006, 06:03 AM
Re: Learn to watch - by CattyNebulart - 06-27-2006, 02:31 PM
finders keepers - by Rieverre - 06-28-2006, 03:37 AM
maaaa - by Rieverre - 08-24-2006, 06:04 PM
For edification: - by ordnance11 - 08-24-2006, 06:54 PM
... damnit ... - by Rieverre - 08-24-2006, 07:50 PM
re:dammit - by ordnance11 - 08-24-2006, 10:51 PM
Zero no Tsukaima - by Foxboy - 08-25-2006, 06:39 AM
re:Zero no Tsukaima - by Rieverre - 08-27-2006, 03:59 AM
Re: re:Zero no Tsukaima - by ClassicDrogn - 08-27-2006, 04:42 AM
Zero no Tsukaima fic snippet - by Rieverre - 08-29-2006, 07:59 PM
re:Zero no Tsukaima fic snippet - by ordnance11 - 08-29-2006, 11:31 PM
THe funniest part for -me- - by katreus - 08-30-2006, 02:28 AM
ZnT - continued - by Rieverre - 09-04-2006, 01:05 AM
Re: Learn to watch - by Valles - 09-05-2006, 04:50 AM
Re: Learn to watch - by ClassicDrogn - 09-05-2006, 06:22 AM
to the victor go the spoils? - by Rieverre - 09-05-2006, 04:35 PM
Justice Tempered by Humanity - by SkyeFire - 09-05-2006, 09:41 PM
just one step closer to the edge - by Rieverre - 10-04-2006, 07:05 PM
Re: just one step closer to the edge - by Sirrocco - 10-06-2006, 07:54 PM
Re: just one step closer to the edge - by CattyNebulart - 12-04-2006, 01:39 AM
Re: just one step closer to the edge - by Elsa Bibat - 12-25-2006, 04:59 PM
Re: just one step closer to the edge - by Valles - 12-31-2006, 10:17 AM
Re: Learn to watch - by Valles - 01-01-2007, 07:45 PM
Re: Learn to watch - by Rieverre - 01-02-2007, 12:49 AM
Re: Learn to watch - by AbyssalDaemon - 01-02-2007, 05:30 AM
Re: Learn to watch - by Rieverre - 01-02-2007, 06:14 AM
Re: Learn to watch - by AbyssalDaemon - 01-02-2007, 06:59 AM
Hey Valles: - by ordnance11 - 04-29-2007, 08:57 PM
Hey Valles: - by Rieverre - 05-03-2007, 12:25 AM
Story of my life - by ordnance11 - 05-09-2007, 03:41 AM
Speaking of which - by DKnight54 - 05-09-2007, 03:51 AM
Re: Speaking of which - by Florin - 05-12-2007, 10:36 AM

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