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Incarna ch2 - done - alpha
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07-12-2005, 10:46 AM
Hmm, looks interesting. Not quite sure what you have in mind but interesting.
You might want to correct this line though:
"It's half a chance than you had before."
I'm guessing you want 'more' between 'chance' and 'than'.
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Incarna ch2 - done - alpha - by Rieverre - 07-11-2005, 11:48 PM
c&c - by drakensis - 07-12-2005, 10:46 AM
re: c&c - by Rieverre - 07-12-2005, 01:00 PM
Re: re: c&c - by Bob Schroeck - 07-28-2005, 07:04 PM
Re: re: c&c - by Rieverre - 07-28-2005, 07:18 PM
c&c - by itsune9tl - 07-28-2005, 08:38 PM
Re: c&c - by Rieverre - 07-28-2005, 09:36 PM
Re: c&c - by Bob Schroeck - 07-29-2005, 01:38 PM
anudder one - by Sirrocco - 08-13-2005, 05:06 AM
anudder one - by Rieverre - 08-13-2005, 11:47 PM

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