Good stuff.
Two quibbles: You have "four" at one point where you mean "found", and it's "beck and call", not "beckon call".
Otherwise, very cool and getting cooler.
-- Bob
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It's spelt "Frodo Baggins" but it's pronounced "Throat-wobbler Mangrove."
Two quibbles: You have "four" at one point where you mean "found", and it's "beck and call", not "beckon call".
Otherwise, very cool and getting cooler.
-- Bob
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It's spelt "Frodo Baggins" but it's pronounced "Throat-wobbler Mangrove."