"With a brief flash of a glowing, cyclopean face as my 'self' I rushed, headlong, towards it."
If you mean that you had a flash of your "self" in hte form of a face, then this needs a comma. Otherwise, I think some words need to be shifted around.
Sirrocco
If you mean that you had a flash of your "self" in hte form of a face, then this needs a comma. Otherwise, I think some words need to be shifted around.
Sirrocco