Thanks for the tips, I hopefully corrected all of them.
As for where they are, it's nowhere special, just a archaeological dig led by Yuuno that ran into some problems with the drones, and Hayate is the TSAB representative in case there is lost logia trouble. And since it's between semesters Nanoha decided to go and help out.
It would be nice for Signum to know a bit about her past, but in the current version at least she has no easy way of finding out. Laevantein could blab but it doesn't seem the type. I used to have some stuff from Signum's perspective but it didn't fit with the rest being in first person, so I dropped it.The end also used to have a bunch of exposition that I decided to cut.
E: "Did they... did they just endorse the combination of the JSDF and US Army by showing them as two lesbian lolicons moving in together and holding hands and talking about how 'intimate' they were?"
B: "Have you forgotten so soon? They're phasing out Don't Ask, Don't Tell."
As for where they are, it's nowhere special, just a archaeological dig led by Yuuno that ran into some problems with the drones, and Hayate is the TSAB representative in case there is lost logia trouble. And since it's between semesters Nanoha decided to go and help out.
It would be nice for Signum to know a bit about her past, but in the current version at least she has no easy way of finding out. Laevantein could blab but it doesn't seem the type. I used to have some stuff from Signum's perspective but it didn't fit with the rest being in first person, so I dropped it.The end also used to have a bunch of exposition that I decided to cut.
E: "Did they... did they just endorse the combination of the JSDF and US Army by showing them as two lesbian lolicons moving in together and holding hands and talking about how 'intimate' they were?"
B: "Have you forgotten so soon? They're phasing out Don't Ask, Don't Tell."