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Update thread doll number 9: Attack of the killer robots "Disassemble? No!!!"
 
And If That Don't Work?

Chapter 4

Enter Asuka.... who finds out just how out of date her training is.
 
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The Wise One (Potter)

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A Mother's Love: Fire and Blood (Naruto)
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"Anyone can be a winner if their definition of victory is flexible enough." - The DM of the Rings XXXV
 
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And If That Don't Work?




Chapter 4


Enter Asuka.... who finds out just how out of date her training is.
Any more drawn-out scenes like the Jet Alone rant from the last chapter? I liked the first two chapters, but if the author's going to keep
using his characters as mouthpieces for rants about how much the canon organizations suck, I'm taking it off my alerts.

Pronounced "shy guy."
 
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Quote: DreadnaughtVV wrote:

And If That Don't Work?




Chapter 4


Enter Asuka.... who finds out just how out of date her training is.


Any more drawn-out scenes like the Jet Alone rant from the last chapter? I liked the first two chapters, but if the author's going to keep
using his characters as mouthpieces for rants about how much the canon organizations suck, I'm taking it off my alerts.

It's not so bad this time. He rips 3rd Branch a new one over how the delivery of Asuka and her Eva are handled (as well as her training) and heads roll.
 
It's a little over the top in terms of 'propaganda piece' at the end... That said, sending Unit 02 across the world on a carrier and NOT fitting it
for water operations is rather... idiotic :lol
 
But weren't the Russians always a bit over-the-top when it came to propaganda? Wink
 
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Chunin Exam Day (Naruto)
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"Anyone can be a winner if their definition of victory is flexible enough." - The DM of the Rings XXXV
 
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