Quote:Black Aeronaut wrote:Fahad has written 6 chapters to date. 1 through 4 is the set-up. Chapters 5 and 6 is the pay-off. I recommend reading it through first. Or dive right into chapter 5. If you don't mind people looking at you like you've lost your mind, when you start laughing like a loon.
Oh my god... Please tell me the rest of the fic is like this!
Here's a piece of Chapter 5: The Bell Test
Quote:"So did you get it?" Excitement clear in her voice.__________________
"Yes, I got it. Tell Shikamaru that I got him the bait he wanted, hurry!"
"Ok, Ok," She held up her hands, "sheesh, calm down Hikaru. Why are you panicking?"
A
wave of Killing Intent washed over us, so thick it felt like we were
drowning in it. Above us the sky was filled with the fluttering of wings
as every birds that called the forest home fled to the skies. The world
flash with the colour of lightning blue before a maddened howl, more
beast than man, echoed through the woods.
"RAIKIRI!"
I gave Naruto a panicked glance, "That's why." Then I jabbed her, popping the clone so that the original could get the message.
It
was then that I made my mistake. Instead of following Shikamaru's
instructions and running straight ahead towards my destination, I
allowed my curiosity to get the better of me and made the mistake of
glancing at Kakashi with my Byakugan.
Oh how I wish I didn't.
Had
you ever seen a pissed off Elite Jonin, one that was really trying to
kill you? Not for a mission or duty but because he honest to god wanted
nothing more than to wrap his hands around your neck and squeeze until
it snaps. I did, and I'm not ashamed to say it scared the living crap
out of me.
His single eye shone with pure loathing as he came
after me, his mouth twisted into a hate filled snarl as foam dotted the
edge of his lips. He didn't even bother tree hopping and just ran
straight to me, cutting down anything that got in his way, leaving a
path of destruction behind him.
Oh Shit! I stopped looking at the madman and began hightailing out of there as fast as I could. Legs! Run Faster! RUN BITCH RUN!
Into terror!, Into valour!
Charge ahead! No! Never turn
Yes, it's into the fire we fly
And the devil will burn!
- Scarlett Pimpernell