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Update 12: Cleanup on Isle Six!
 
#51
and a new chapter of Dungeon Keeper Ami:

http://addventure.bast-enterprises.de/229431.html
-Terry
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"so listen up boy, or pornography starring your mother will be the second worst thing to happen to you today"
TF2: Spy
 
#52
There are three new chapters of Kinsfire's Betrayed, starting http://kinsfire.fanficauthors.net/Betra ... s_Learned/]here. Unfortunately, I think it's turning into a Harry Sue kind of story if only for the girls that fall into his lap, and how quickly they do so, in the course of these chapters.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
 
#53
Bob Schroeck Wrote:There are three new chapters of Kinsfire's Betrayed, starting http://kinsfire.fanficauthors.net/Betra ... s_Learned/]here. Unfortunately, I think it's turning into a Harry Sue kind of story if only for the girls that fall into his lap, and how quickly they do so, in the course of these chapters.

and not a particularly good one, either... it started out as an interesting premise, but it quickly approached the point where i was half-expecting him to get laser eyes for Hedwig....
-Z, Post-reader at Medium
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If architects built buildings the way programmers write programs, the first woodpecker to come along would destroy civilization.
 
#54
Poison Pen, http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5554780/13/Poison_Pen]Chapter 13
Taking Sights, http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4109686/23/Taking_Sights]Chapter 23
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
 
#55
Counts of blood has updated (Muppets/BtVS, Crossover that should not be but works far too well.)

http://www.tthfanfic.org/...inda+Counts+of+Blood.htm
E: "Did they... did they just endorse the combination of the JSDF and US Army by showing them as two lesbian lolicons moving in together and holding hands and talking about how 'intimate' they were?"
B: "Have you forgotten so soon? They're phasing out Don't Ask, Don't Tell."
 
#56
Another chapter of Betrayed. 
http://kinsfire.fanficaut.../Betrayed/Danger_Rising/
Even if Harry is a Sue, at least his opposition is on roughly the same level as he is.  Dumbledore has an unrealistic level of influence, and I find it makes things interesting.  It's almost like if Partially Kissed Hero hadn't run totally off the rails.

My Unitarian Jihad Name is: Brother Atom Bomb of Courteous Debate. Get yours.

I've been writing a bit.
 
#57
Given that it's a Kinsfire fic, what can you expect?

Just off the top of my head, I honestly can't think of a single fic he's done in which Harry hasn't gotten multiple women, and generally there's a lot of gratuitous focus on sex into the bargain.
 
#58
new chapter of oh just click it already
(I swear, is this guy powered by lack of sleep or something?)
-Terry
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"so listen up boy, or pornography starring your mother will be the second worst thing to happen to you today"
TF2: Spy
 
#59
Actually, I'm wondering if Kinsfire isn't actually trying to write a deconstruction of the Harry Sue subgenre. It's impossible to say yet; we'll need to see more chapters to be sure -- but at the moment, setting up a Harry Sue, only to have Evil!Dumbledore and Evil!Minion!Snape be equal to the task of countering him, is rather unusual. If they can keep it up, I'll call this a deconstruction for sure; if Harry (or the girls) starts sweeping the opposition away with ease, though...
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
 
#60
http://www.fanfiction.net...3234/12/Exchange_Student

Exchange Student, Chapter 12
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Sucrose Octanitrate.
Proof positive that with sufficient motivation, you can make anything explode.
 
#61
Bob Schroeck Wrote:Actually, I'm wondering if Kinsfire isn't actually trying to write a deconstruction of the Harry Sue subgenre. It's impossible to say yet; we'll need to see more chapters to be sure -- but at the moment, setting up a Harry Sue, only to have Evil!Dumbledore and Evil!Minion!Snape be equal to the task of countering him, is rather unusual. If they can keep it up, I'll call this a deconstruction for sure; if Harry (or the girls) starts sweeping the opposition away with ease, though...
   It appears to be moving more towards the latter than the former with the latest chapter. Nothing definitive so far but I'd have to say Dumbledore came off worse from the conflict in this chapter.
D for Drakensis

You're only young once, but immaturity is forever.
 
#62
www.fanfiction.net/s/5409165/31/Its_For ... se_I_Swear
It's For a Good Cause, I Swear! (Naruto)
www.fanfiction.net/s/4812162/25/Harry_P ... Sixth_Year
Harry Potter's Sixth Year (Potter)

www.fanfiction.net/s/5604382/6/The_Accidental_Bond
The Accidental Bond (Potter)
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"Anyone can be a winner if their definition of victory is flexible enough." - The DM of the Rings XXXV
 
#63
drakensis Wrote:   It appears to be moving more towards the latter than the former with the latest chapter. Nothing definitive so far but I'd have to say Dumbledore came off worse from the conflict in this chapter.
I would agree.  This isn't definitive- Dumbledore is down, but not out. 
Everything he's done so far is rather low-key: legal fudgery, manipulation, memory editing, and coercion.  What'll happen when he starts pulling out the stops?

My Unitarian Jihad Name is: Brother Atom Bomb of Courteous Debate. Get yours.

I've been writing a bit.
 
#64
There's another new chapter of Betrayed/i] -- http://kinsfire.fanficauthors.net/Betra ... _Meet_Fan/]"Excrement, Meet Fan".
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
 
#65
www.fanfiction.net/s/5117161/25/Fragmented_Ideas
Fragmented Ideas by Chilord (Potter)
www.fanfiction.net/s/5588054/7/Without_Sasuke
Without Sasuke (Naruto)
www.fanfiction.net/s/5403644/15/Naruto_Asunder
www.fanfiction.net/s/5403644/16/Naruto_Asunder
Naruto Asunder

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"Anyone can be a winner if their definition of victory is flexible enough." - The DM of the Rings XXXV
 
#66
That Fragmented Ideas installment is a lot of fun; I'd love to see that expanded and carried through the rest of the series.

Oh, and for those who are impatient for its conclusion, which should be in a day or so, you can get all the remaining installments of Kinsfire's Betrayed in the files section of a Yahoo Group called "3 or 4 Part Harmony", where he apparently was betaing it. Naturally, I read them last night -- there are only two chapters left at the time I write this -- but I will hold off on my thoughts and/or opinions until everyone else has a chance to.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
 
#67
Ranma. martial Artist. AU. (tff has a bit more story. Though it ends on a cliffhanger.)
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3831818/3/Artist
http://z14.invisionfree.c...showtopic=6121&st=90
 
#68
Bob Schroeck Wrote: files section of a Yahoo Group called "3 or 4 Part Harmony"
Link please, according to Yahoo, this group doesn't exist.
 
#69
Here's the link to http://groups.yahoo.com/group/3_or_4_Part_Harmony/]3 or 4 Part Harmony.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
 
#70
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5144486/17/Infinity]Infinity Chapter 17.
 
#71
Spiral_Matrix has updated a while back.
 
#72
www.fanfiction.net/s/5124616/10/Metal_Guru
Metal Guru (Terminator: the Sarah Connor Chronicles)
www.fanfiction.net/s/5244813/36/A_Champions_New_Hope
A Champion's New Hope (Potter)
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"Anyone can be a winner if their definition of victory is flexible enough." - The DM of the Rings XXXV
 
#73
Recent updates to the BT/Clancyverse thread.
It hadn't occurred to me that, on top of everything else, Clancyverse Earth has Sam "Splinter Cell" Fisher. o.O;
--Sam
"The Russians were working on a beard!  WE HAD A FACIAL HAIR GAP!"
 
#74
Evil Midnight Lurker Wrote:Recent updates to the BT/Clancyverse thread.
It hadn't occurred to me that, on top of everything else, Clancyverse Earth has Sam "Splinter Cell" Fisher. o.O;

Well, it is Tom Clancy's Splinter Cell.  It was only a matter of time.  Countdown till RAINBOW makes a HALO drop assault onto some Comstar facility.
---
Jon
"And that must have caused my dad's brain to break in half, replaced by a purely mechanical engine of revenge!"
 
#75
Wednesday's Child by Tail Kinker (Ranma/Macross)
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5218374/28/Wednesdays_Child


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