Dartz Wrote:Yes.For me, it was the fights. They all seemed rather, well, curbstompy to me. The only points when there was any actual tension was when Miyuki (who had been constantly drained for days) was attacked by Nepherite, who was honestly trying to kill her, and the end bit where Metallia was revived.
I said as much to the author when they posted it on another forum. It's the 'Where are they now' Epilogue just bolted on to the end that does it. It'd been an awesome fic.... so why ruin it with a bolt-on like that?
-----
Stand between the Silver Crystal and the Golden Sea.
"Youngsters these days just have no appreciation for the magnificence of the legendary cucumber." --Krityan Elder, Tales of Vesperia.