Yeah, Jayne is kind of joy because of the lack of subtlety. In this situation, he'll probably let Mal worry about the money for now.
Rajvik, that's some fine writing. Despite everything I say in the Politics forum, I do like your work here. I learned the word "bluenette", even. But... go check to make sure that there are periods on the end of every paragraph; I see a couple missing periods.
On my own work, I'm trying to figure out a way to add men to my apartment complex. The thing about slice-of-life is that it's very female heavy as a genre, as is magical girls. But I've got a lot of young adults in my group who will want to date someone. So I need a series of some sort that adds unattached boys without throwing the balance too far off. As amusing as the idea of Sakaki piloting Gurren is, not sure that's a way I should go. I've been playing around with the idea of Ika-musume or Gidget, but those don't really help the ratio. Ouran Host Club, maybe? I've also thought about Utena too (as I'm obviously a super fan), as that nets three attractive, unattached boys. But I'm not sure I trust my writing skills enough to write it. Ideas?
Rajvik, that's some fine writing. Despite everything I say in the Politics forum, I do like your work here. I learned the word "bluenette", even. But... go check to make sure that there are periods on the end of every paragraph; I see a couple missing periods.
On my own work, I'm trying to figure out a way to add men to my apartment complex. The thing about slice-of-life is that it's very female heavy as a genre, as is magical girls. But I've got a lot of young adults in my group who will want to date someone. So I need a series of some sort that adds unattached boys without throwing the balance too far off. As amusing as the idea of Sakaki piloting Gurren is, not sure that's a way I should go. I've been playing around with the idea of Ika-musume or Gidget, but those don't really help the ratio. Ouran Host Club, maybe? I've also thought about Utena too (as I'm obviously a super fan), as that nets three attractive, unattached boys. But I'm not sure I trust my writing skills enough to write it. Ideas?
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