When I first joined these forums, I mentioned that I was working on some fanfiction.  Now, I got sidetracked by another project, but I've made some serious progress towards writing, and I think I'm getting close to actually making it available.
I'd like to get some prereaders for the story, though.  I have a couple of friends reading it, but honestly, I'd like to get more negative constructive feedback so that I can improve as a writer.  Is there anyone here who would be willing to be a prereader for my Azumanga Daioh fic, Interpol Manzai?

Interpol Manzai: summary Wrote:The girls of Azumanga Daioh are age 25 now, and Tomo has her dream job as an ICPO agent. Yomi finds herself pulled into Tomo's jetsetting world of wild adventures, high-tech intrigue, solving mysteries, and lots of slice-of-life comedy.  Many crossovers to other works, but the focus is on how the Azumanga girls grow to face life as young adults.

http://www.mit.edu/newsoffice/2012/biol ... +-+News%29
Synopsis: the cochlear contains a biological battery that can be tapped to power low-power devices without impairing hearing.
It's cool, but it's limited. Even so, it's the first step to implanted computers and sensory/commo gear.

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Lo, how the mighty had fallen!
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Into terror!,  Into valour!
Charge ahead! No! Never turn
Yes, it's into the fire we fly
And the devil will burn!
- Scarlett Pimpernell

A new song I've been hearing on the radio
Breathing Underwater by Metric
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wOxroKyNvI8
Power: breathing underwater. duh. 8)
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"I've always wanted to be somebody, but I should have been more specific." - George Carlin

It's that time again!  No, it's not time to spin the Wheel of Morality (TM), it's time to select panelists for the Anime Central 2013 Fanfiction Panel!

Anime Central (www.acen.org) will take place on May 17-19 at the Hyatt Regency O'Hare in Rosemont, Illinois.  If you're going to be attending Acen and you're interested in being on the panel, please send the following information:

1.  Your name or preferred handle.

2.  Your real name, if different.  By that I mean full, real name, including first and last names for the panel review board.

3.  A list of your preferred works, including any you may have written in the past year.

4.  The URL of your website, if any, or where your works can be found.

5.  If you've been on a fanfic panel before, and if so, where.

6.  (OPTIONAL) Why you'd like to be on the panel.

Please private mail me at pmui1@NOSPAMPLEASE.prodigy.net by November 30 if you're interested.  The panel will be selected shortly after that.

(I'm sure you know what to remove--it's in capitals.) 

Hope to hear from you soon!

--Pearson "Doc" Mui

Thanks to our friends at the EPU forum's, I ran across this trailer...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pYW2GmHB5xs.

Okay - remember back in September when I mentioned that one of the things on my Bucket List to do was use Wormhole to move Hamidon from his spot in the crater in the Abyss in the Lady Grey Task Force? As the ultimate "Stupid Controller Trick"?

Well tonight, I just did it. 

Kara Skye, my Grav/Kin controller Wormholed the nucleus of the Hamidon completely out of the goo, up the crater wall, to the top of the cliff, and all the way to the Helicopter! (Nothing but net!) Actually placing the last Wormhole spot IN the Helicopter. Then wormholed him BACK down the waterfall to the crater floor where we finally took him out. A truly epic finale. 

I really wish you guys could have been there. But since all of you have moved on and I can't get you to play the game enough to get a group together, I have to take my opportunities where I can find them. 

I hope sharing this makes up some for you not being able to see it in person. They always say - pics or it didn't happen. Well I have both a demorecord file and many screenshots. Here's a few of them. Plus a transcript of the chatlog from the minute I made the first Wormhole. The reactions of my other teammates were priceless!

[WHiSPER X]Grimrose: This power combination is wicked!
[Team] Professor Eviella: They never really did find a good way for MM's to help much on mitos
[Team] Pop rock': we need to hit the same one
[Team] Merryl of Volt: ok, lets all concentrate on one green goo.   my target sine I have (am?) the star
[Team] Yina Draconaiis: Works for me.
[Team] Professor Eviella: Sounds good.  Spam holds
[Team] Merryl of Volt: splat
[Team] Professor Eviella: Split
[Team] Merryl of Volt: oh I missed one.  my mistake
[Team] Kara Skye: YESSSSS!!!!!
[Team] Kara Skye: YES IT WORKS!!!!!!!
[Team] Ghost Chamber: nuu
[Team] Yina Draconaiis: O.O
[Team] Yina Draconaiis: OMG!
[Team] Kara Skye: STUPID CONTROLLER TRICKS! TONIGHT ON LETTERMAN!
[Team] Sation: o/
[Team] Yina Draconaiis: I APPROVE!
[Team] Ghost Chamber: LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
[Team] Ghost Chamber: omg
[Team] Professor Eviella: Ok that's funny. 
[Team] Merryl of Volt: ROFL
[Team] Yina Draconaiis: ERMAGHERD
[Team] Ghost Chamber: oh my god my stomach hurts
[Team] Kara Skye: Don'T KILL IT!
[Team] Sation: throw em in teh sky 
[Team] Ghost Chamber: ahaha
[Team] Ghost Chamber: AAAAAAAAAHH
[Team] Kara Skye: Whatever you do, DON'T KILL IT!
[Team] Merryl of Volt: that was truly neat
[Team] Yina Draconaiis: (How do you get it to move so far? I've yet to figure out that aspect of Wormhole)
[WHiSPER X]no hero: Nite Whisps. Nite Grim. Nite Evie
[Team] Sation: worhole will throw far but you ahve to be close to the targets
[Tell] J Tanker: Lambda?
[Team] Yina Draconaiis: Ahhh.
[WHiSPER X]Whisper X: nini, nero!
[Team] Merryl of Volt: small yellow anyone?
[Team] Kara Skye: LOLOL
[WHiSPER X]Grimrose: Goooodnight Nero!
[Team] Kara Skye: GLORIOUS!!!!! HEE!!!!
[Team] Cheetala: how do you do that?
[Team] Merryl of Volt: ty
[Team] Ghost Chamber: I will regret never rolling a Grav....
[Team] Kara Skye: I'm going to get him all the way out of the crater!!!
[Team] Merryl of Volt: that is awesome
[Team] Yina Draconaiis: OMG.
[Team] Ghost Chamber: .......
[Team] Yina Draconaiis: Man, if D was 50, we could tag-team this. XD
[Team] Merryl of Volt: totally worth the TF
[Team] Ghost Chamber: Taking a screenshot of this.
[Team] Sation: demorecording mew
[Team] Ghost Chamber: I...just...there's not even sufficient words.
[Team] Sation: heh there's soem rikti we could throw hami at up there
[Team] Kara Skye: Tell Voltar he was WRONG. And ask him how does he like his crow? Sauteed? Baked?
[Team] Pop rock': hami split
[Team] Ghost Chamber: Funny how it's just the nucleous and the blob is still down there...
[Team] Kara Skye: Up the wall, out of the crater! NOTHING BUT NET!!!
[Team] Professor Eviella: Oh lord, the Rikti are attacking it!
[Team] Pop rock': lol
[Team] Kara Skye: They can't kill it.
[Team] Professor Eviella: But hami can kill them...
[Team] Sation: bwahaha 
[Team] Sation: pop rock that wa sawesome
[Team] Merryl of Volt: As far as neat tricks go...   that's very damned awesome



[Team] Yina Draconaiis: Oh my gob, this is hilarious.
[Team] Ghost Chamber: This could be the single greatest thing I've ever seen.
[Team] Yina Draconaiis: How far are you taking it?
[Team] Pop rock': lol it is?   i dont know what to do ive never seen this
[Team] Merryl of Volt: accept TP stomp
[Team] Pop rock': plz
[Team] Ghost Chamber: All I know is it's making for some epic screenshots
[Team] Kara Skye: HEEE!
[Team] Pop rock': thank u
[Team] Ghost Chamber: Please put it INSIDE the heli.  



[Team] Yina Draconaiis: Oh god.
[Team] Merryl of Volt: lol
[Team] Kara Skye: Oooh.. I live to serve!



[Team] Cheetala: can make a new folder just for hami on vacation screenshots in the yahoo groups
[Team] Cheetala: we stealing hami!
[Team] Ghost Chamber: *dies*
[Team] Pop rock': i dont know
[Team] Kara Skye: LOLOLOLOL



[WHiSPER X]Merryl: hami is on vacation...  taking Heli to Atlas Park
[Team] Kara Skye: I am laughing MADLY right now. MADLY I TELL YOU!!! XD
[Team] Sation: hamicopter
[Team] Pop rock': lol



[Team] Merryl of Volt: stop t...  it hurts
[Team] Cheetala: yah...ouchies
[Team] Ghost Chamber: Yep.  Definitely takes the cake.
[Team] Ghost Chamber: The most hilarious thing I have witnessed in this game XD
[Team] Professor Eviella: Get to da choppa!
[Team] Kara Skye: **DIES!!!!***







[Team] Cheetala: any other good spots to put it in?
[Team] Sation: mayeb we shoudlw ind it down.... .>
[Team] Merryl of Volt: If I wasn't seeing it with my own eyes, I would never have believed it.. even with the pics to prove it
[Team] Merryl of Volt: throw it off the cliff.. maybe it'll fall to its death
[Team] Pop rock': lol
[Team] Kara Skye: Should I?
[Team] Merryl of Volt: YES!  Break the egg
[Team] Sation: its fun to toss it in teh air though the invisible platfoirms are still out there 
[Team] Kara Skye: OK!
[Team] Pop rock': to bad there is no lava to put it in
[Team] Cheetala: on the river...then tip of the waterfall....would make good screenshots for captions
[Team] Kara Skye: OOOh...
[Team] Kara Skye: Yes



[Team] Sation: you might be able to get it to hold midair if you can find a platform. its kind of hard to set
[Team] Kara Skye: Find one for me and I can do it.
[Team] Cheetala: you're getting close
[Team] Yina Draconaiis: BRB
[Team] Merryl of Volt: what excellent placement
[Team] Professor Eviella: Don't go chasing waterfalls...
[Team] Cheetala: edge in front of me......and would even work for one waterfall that's midway
[Team] Ghost Chamber: wow
[Team] Kara Skye: Now THAT is a screenshot!







[Team] Sation: hami eye crying?
[Team] Kara Skye: Ok. Where's that platform?
[Team] Ghost Chamber: looks great from up high
[Team] Cheetala: i'm standing on the mid waterfall
[Team] Sation: they're in the goo. I've only ever done it once froma  toss
[Team] Cheetala: would be funny taking a group pic wif hami too
[Team] Cheetala: like a weekend at bernie's hami style 
[Team] Kara Skye: No invis platform?
[Team] Kara Skye: LOL
[Team] Merryl of Volt: nope.. toss it
[Team] Pop rock': lol
[Team] Merryl of Volt: it lurves you Ragey.. it really does...  especially yr liver
[Team] Cheetala: ooh...even do funny pics wif hami like at end of Hangover movies
[Team] Kara Skye: Huh!
[Team] Kara Skye: All I'm getting now is "Invalid Target" over and over.
[Team] Kara Skye: I can't seem to move him now.
[Team] Pop rock': hes stuck?
[Team] Merryl of Volt: awww
[Team] Kara Skye: Oh wait
[Team] Kara Skye: Ok now I got it.
[Team] Cheetala: it moved me
[Team] Pop rock': lol
[Team] Kara Skye: Bit of an oops there. I'll get it out for a mid-air drop on the next one.
[Team] Sation: say when =)
[Team] Kara Skye: WHEN
[Team] Merryl of Volt: no worries... this is the most awesome thing I've ever seen in the game
[Team] Professor Eviella: It's up there, at least.
[Team] Kara Skye: Huh
[Team] Kara Skye: Didn't go the direction I pointed him at.
[Team] Merryl of Volt: architecture on the way maybe?
[Team] Kara Skye: Could be
[Team] Cheetala: yayz!
[Team] Kara Skye: Here's another good screenshot.
[Team] Merryl of Volt: Sitting on the water.. thinking my own thoughts
[Team] Cheetala: this is where i requested for mid waterfall
[Team] Kara Skye: Cool. Glad to get it for ya!



[Team] Cheetala: nooo, hami.....i'm your friend!
[Team] Ghost Chamber: lol
[Team] Ghost Chamber: tping whisper
[Team] Cheetala: was sneaking my way to ledgesit next to hami
[Team] Ghost Chamber: nvm someone has it





[Team] Merryl of Volt: what do you need whisper?  I have no wakies left
[Team] Cheetala: ish ok...ty tho
[Team] Merryl of Volt: yw
[Team] Ghost Chamber: Apparently he's grumpy
[Team] Merryl of Volt: Ok everyone got screenies?   Lets end this please.  I wanna run a ITF before my later dinner
[Team] Sation: mew
[Team] Pop rock': all this moving about has made him extra sensitive
[Team] Sation: throw him out here
[Team] Ghost Chamber: we have the chance to fight him in a ridiculous location!
[Team] Sation: oh sure =)
[Team] Pop rock': here?
[Team] Ghost Chamber: Whispie? @.@
[Team] Cheetala: yush?
[Team] Cheetala: yush?
[Team] Ghost Chamber: oh, thought we lost you
[Tell] Throbbing Maidenhead: O.O  gl
[Team] Kara Skye: How's this?
[Team] Kara Skye: Is that good?
[Team] Sation: *paws up*
[Team] Merryl of Volt: is good
[Team] Kara Skye: Excellent.
[Team] Merryl of Volt: I got my screenies
[Team] Cheetala: ty!



















[Team] Merryl of Volt: Ok, raeady??
[Team] Ghost Chamber: kay
[Team] Sation: hami mistook em for the tanker
[Team] Professor Eviella: That was AWESOME
[Team] Yina Draconaiis: Seems almost a shame to take it out now.
[Team] Ghost Chamber: No one will believe us.
[Team] Yina Draconaiis: Wow.
[Team] Kara Skye: Plennty of Screens and at least 2 demorecords. Trust me. They'll believe it.
[Team] Merryl of Volt: Ok, lets Murdderlise this map
[Team] Kara Skye: Righto!
[Team] Pop rock': humm 
[Team] Sation: afk a sec mew
[Team] Professor Eviella: (Note to self:  It's after midnight, being tired is NOT surprising!)
[Team] Professor Eviella: (Any chance of a MoDD or MoUG tomorrow, Whisper?)
[Team] Kara Skye: I'd love either of those
[Team] Professor Eviella: (MoDD is probably the easiest trial to MO, so good salvage for a new incarnate...)
[Team] Kara Skye: Y'know - I don't CARE that the challenge failed. I WORMHOLED HAMI INTO THE HELICOPTER!!!! MUA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!!
[Team] Professor Eviella: AMEN!
[Team] Sation: I am still chuckling over that
[Team] Merryl of Volt: Amen Kara
[Team] Ghost Chamber: That is, in fact, all that matters.
[Team] Professor Eviella: Thank you for sharing something new and special in this game with us, even now. :-)
[Team] Kara Skye: ."Hami in a Heli." There's your meme for the day.
[Team] Professor Eviella: I can't say I'm ok with the game ending now that I've seen that.  But... it's maybe 1% less bad. :-)
[Team] Kara Skye: XD
[Team] Kara Skye: It is at that.

Anyone have any thoughts on the state of the nation of Somalia in the IST timeline?

Thanks,

-Mike
Michael R. Smith (lastfreehuman@gmail.com)
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GURPS IST Aleph Twitter (http://twitter.com/IstAleph/)
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In the IST book, I see that AA's powers appear to be Seeder gene "eruption" at puberty; but I seem to recall something about a medallion here on the forums. Is this a case of a difference between the Warrior's World source material and the conversion of the original character to GURPS?

Curious, mostly because of an Infinite Worlds version of the character who becomes important in my timeline.

Thanks,

-Mike
Michael R. Smith (lastfreehuman@gmail.com)
GURPS IST Aleph Wordpress (http://istaleph.wordpress.com/)
GURPS IST Aleph Twitter (http://twitter.com/IstAleph/)
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My Blog (http://lastfreehuman.wordpress.com/)

Hello Folks,

Looking for a judgement call, for the IST characters with the Seeder genes (as opposed to other sources) would the proper power modifier be Super-10% or Mutant -10%?

Also, is the assumption that even people who get their powers by Accident/Experimentation are merely stress-activated Latents?

Thanks,

-Mike
Michael R. Smith (lastfreehuman@gmail.com)
GURPS IST Aleph Wordpress (http://istaleph.wordpress.com/)
GURPS IST Aleph Twitter (http://twitter.com/IstAleph/)
Trek This! Wordpress (http://dthiller.wordpress.com/)
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