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  [RFC][dskswdyhms] Fixing Zeke (Pinging anyone who hated him before)
Posted by: Black Aeronaut - 01-06-2011, 03:07 PM - Forum: Hangar 13 - Replies (5)

Okay, so some of you guys hated Zeke as he was.  That's fine, I can understand... but more importantly, I want to get better at this.
To that end, I picked up a trial version of a character building software to help me plug up the holes.  Bear in mind, I'm not mindlessly following the templates, but a lot of the suggestions have been useful in both helping me to understand Zeke and to help make him into a more believable character.
At this time I am still working on tweaking things a bit, but I think I got enough groundwork down for everyone here to comment on.


Ezekiel Darkwood
Character Type 1: The Perfectionist - a principaled, moral person on a mission.
Sub-type: Withdrawn
General Personality:
Ezekiel is a very principled and self-disciplined person who strives for personal perfection. He holds himself and society up to strict ideals, seeing life in black and white. Ideas, people and actions are either right or wrong, good or evil. There's very little middle ground. To Ezekiel, the world is an unstable, even dangerous, place and it's up to him to stand up for what's right. Dirty Harry was this type. The withdrawn subtype tends to be detached from the world, an outsider on a mission, sometimes showing more affection and connection to non-humans, animals, art or automobiles. At times, he tends to be stiff, impatient and sarcastic, standing up for what he believes is right no matter who is on the other side: the police, the boss, God - doesn't matter. What's right is right.
Personality Flaw:
Ezekiel's character flaw is based on the incorrect belief that he and whatever situation he's involved with can be perfect if everyone acts correctly. He avoids making mistakes or losing self-control. During the story, he learns that perfection is impossible, that the world is forever unstable and that's okay.
Effects Under Pressure:
When he's under pressure, he gets angry, feeling misunderstood and alone. When he's relaxed and secure, he becomes less controlled by rules, living more in the moment, becoming more comfortable with letting life happen.
Background - Childhood:
Ezekiel's childhood can be defined in one word: unstable.
To begin with, Zeke was chosen before birth to be the Avatar of the Native-American trickster god, Raven.  This is made visibly noticable by the vicious looking black tribal-style markings under his eyes - he was born with this feature and attempts to remove it were in vain.  The only way to hide it is with prodigious use of concealing makeup.
Being the Avatar to a trickster-god naturally means that life is chaotic.  Accidents happen frquently in Zeke's presence.  Zeke never needs to go looking for trouble, it is attracted to him like flies to rotting meat.  Bullies automatically sense his uniqueness and they single him out.  But that was only the begining of his problems.
His father, being in the US Navy long before Zeke was born, was not always around, but what really made his life problematic was the horrific death of his mother - her lower-body was crushed in a high-speed collision with a drunk driver.  Zeke, five years old at the time, was strapped into the back seat and witnessed his mother's agonizingly slow death.  This traumatic event set the stage for a series of psychological issues such as PTSD, Nightmare Disorder, and Depressive Disorder.
Further tragedy struck when his father had a bad landing on a carrier in high-seas, throwing the family into a tail-spin.
While his father recovered, Zeke stayed with his Grandpa Bear.  Also at his side was his childhood friend, Teletha Testarossa.  While Grandpa Bear worked his ancient white magic to fix Zeke's shattered psyche, little Teletha kept him rooted in reality as she played with him, ate with him, and even bathed and slept at his side.  However, the military spares little time for such things and eventually, Zeke had to move on with his father.  While he would make trips to see his Grandpa Bear every summer, he was more or less alone.
Zeke learned early on that it was up to him to define right and wrong and act on those ideals to maintain some sort of internal balance. He aligned himself with the rules to contain his anxiety. Out of this environment, Zeke found stability in facts, not people.  This gave him the appearance of an aloof, elitist, and iconoclastic individual.  However, that is only a facade that hides the still-wounded child inside.  With his closest friends and his family, Zeke is at ease.  But with strangers he is careful, giving his trust tacitly and grudgingly.
Education:
Zeke, tending to be highly skeptical of those he does not trust, is mostly self-educated and is masterful at ferreting out missing information, or at the very least deducing it for himself.  He has a very keen intellect and at the start of the story he is already subscribing to self-study courses in mechanical-, electrical-, and aeronautical-engineering.
Work:
At work, Ezekiel is honest and focused on the right way to get the job done. He wants co-workers to live up to his standards and is willing to help them achieve this. He’s attracted to causes and jobs that fix things.
Dialogue Style:
Ezekiel knows the way things ought to be and is willing to tell anyone his opinion. Since he's the withdrawn subtype, thus less relationship-oriented, he tends to lack tact - stepping on toes, offending others and failing to understand why others get upset (though not always concerned as half the time it is intentional). Because perfection is the prime concern, he speaks proper English.  Facts are always more important than emotional attachment.
Dialogue examples:
"Listen to me, I know what's right."
"I am not angry!"
"I said I'd do it, so I did it."
"No matter how hard I try, it's never good enough."
"I'm not going to give up!"
Internal Dialogue:
"It's up to me to make things right."
"Nothing ever comes quickly enough."
Relationships:
Compared to most of the other characters, Zeke comes off as being the most sensible.  In a relationship, he is very principaled and mature for his age, and his ethical nature and dependability are highly attractive traits.
Conversely he also tends to be the most abrasive personality, often approaching anti-hero qualities.  This shrewd directness tends to effect his relationships adversely, but anyone that honestly takes time to understand him learns to take it somewhat in stride.  The problem is having someone stick around long enough to do so - his mannerisms are at times misconstrued for coldness.  The only way this really happens is when his abrasive nature becomes something of morbid fascination to another character and, whether they realize it or not, they find themselves trying to figure him out and, in turn, becoming attracted to him.
Summary:
Ezekiel exercises too much control over his feelings and this causes problems for himself and others.  He must learn that giving in to his hidden chaotic nature is a critical key to his happiness in whatever situation he's involved in.  Relaxing this control will allow him to start living life on its own terms. He learns that perfection is not necessary for stability or happiness, that what he has and who he is, is good enough after all.

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  [Doctor Who] And Thus The Shippers Head Aspolode.
Posted by: Epsilon - 01-06-2011, 04:41 AM - Forum: General Chatter - Replies (3)

http://www.telegraph.co.u...previous-Doctor-Who.html
So David Tennant is going to marry the biological daughter of the the actor who played the Fifth Doctor, and who is herself the actress who played the fictional daughter (well, cross sex clone) of his own Doctor.
...
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Epsilon
Head aspolode!

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  [meta][fenwiki] I see a new user account...
Posted by: robkelk - 01-06-2011, 03:22 AM - Forum: Fenspace - Replies (31)

So, who is "Donald635603"?
--
Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."

- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012

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  RL Superhero actually *does* something
Posted by: Sofaspud - 01-06-2011, 02:17 AM - Forum: General Chatter - Replies (4)

http://www.escapistmagazi...ts-Robbery-Gains-TV-Fame
Admittedly, it wasn't much, but it's a start.  Most of the supposed RL superheroes you hear about ... don't actually do anything, near as I can tell.

--sofaspud
--"Listening to your kid is the audio equivalent of a Salvador Dali painting, Spud." --OpMegs

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  Gundam 00: Awakening Of The Trailblazer
Posted by: Berk - 01-05-2011, 05:44 PM - Forum: General Chatter - No Replies

Okay, I finally had an opportunity to watch this, and I'm going to try to comment a bit on it without rolling out any spoilers. I'll see how well I can pull that off.

This is the first full feature length movie the Gundam franchise has had in ages and there's a lot riding on it. It's made quite a lot of money but.. is it any good? I could tell as soon as I'd seen it that this was going to be a very polarizing movie. There are elements to it which are blatantly not 'Gundam' and, at times, run counter to messages that people have come to expect in Gundam.

Normally in Gundam you have a dialog of sorts between the main characters and the threat they're facing. A declaration of ideals is handed out on each side and the sides beat each other's faces in until someone is resolved as being 'right.' This movie lacks this completely. The enemy is faceless and voiceless and seemingly implacable. Brave soldiers put their lives on the line, proclaiming their devotion to their cause.. and are met with nothing but a soft metallic hum that will probably stick in my head the same way the Probe from Star Trek 4 did.

The enemy of the movie is, I think, one of the most alien aliens I have seen in recent efforts of speculative fiction. Their biology and home environment is completely unlike Earth's and it shows on basically every level.

One of the most surprising messages that got repeated in the story, both in dialog and in the events of the movie is the idea that 'understanding' is all well and good, and an admirable thing, but there comes a time when you have to be prepared for the thing that doesn't want to understand, that simply does not care or simply cannot be reasoned with. For a Gundam production to say this is almost heresy, and it has gotten a lot of people rather heated.

Is it good? It was entertaining. It was fairly thought provoking to me at least. I know a lot of Gundam fans who are kind of furious right now because they feel like it was 'too super robot' for them to properly enjoy. I wonder what in the world people like that are thinking. I personally recommend it with the following caveat: The movie does not attempt to explain the story to people who are just coming in now, this is not a recap movie and it goes straight away into the epilogue of a two season long TV series without missing a beat, two hours is barely enough time to get the job they wanted to do done.

Of course, just like any regular TV episode of Gundam 00.. make sure to keep watching when the credits roll, there's a little something after the credits end.
- Grumpy Uncle Gearhead

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  Machete
Posted by: Rev Dark - 01-05-2011, 04:28 PM - Forum: General Chatter - No Replies

 

This film needs a few exclamation points after it.  It is not Machete.  It is MACHETE!!!!!.

 

This is an awesome bit of exploitation, or rather mexploitation.  You want blood?  MACHETE!!!! has it.  You want Boobage?  MACHETE!!!! has it.  You want beasts?  MACHETE!! has it.  Danny Oedipal-Gerund Trejo! Steven Conjugating Seagal!  Tom Obscene-literary-construction Savini!  Taking the exploitation genre and kicking it up to 11, Rodriguez has brought his B+ game to this film; not his greatest work, but I have spent time with a lot worse movies.

 

The supporting cast is solid, and a lot of Rodriguez favorites show up – DeNiro and Cheech Marin; and some newcomers including a smoking hot Michelle Rodriguez whost pose cyclopean alteration reveal is the things that dreams are made of.  Jessica Alba shows up; and Lindsay Lohan pops top, pops caps and pops pills (Which is pretty much her normal day.)

Worth every penny.
Cheers,
Shayne

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  SCORE!!!
Posted by: classicdrogn - 01-05-2011, 07:50 AM - Forum: General Chatter - Replies (9)

Specifically, the Steve Jablonsky score from the Bay TF movie, the only thing I judge worthy from it. (does a victory dance) And how worthy it is! Like someone said here when the movie first came out, it "finds all the right buttons and then mashes them with big fucking hammers!"

- CD, exultant
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"Anko, what you do in your free time is your own choice. Use it wisely. And if you do not use it wisely, make sure you thoroughly enjoy whatever unwise thing you are doing." - HymnOfRagnorok as Orochimaru at SpaceBattles
woot Med. Eng., verb, 1st & 3rd pers. prsnt. sg. know, knows

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  Censoring the Great American Novel
Posted by: Jorlem - 01-05-2011, 03:51 AM - Forum: General Chatter - Replies (7)

They're censoring Huckleberry Finn and Tom Sawyer. 
NPR link
The Telegraph
ABC News
What.  The. Hell.
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Stand between the Silver Crystal and the Golden Sea.
"Youngsters these days just have no appreciation for the magnificence of the legendary cucumber."  --Krityan Elder, Tales of Vesperia.

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  God Only Knows
Posted by: Jorlem - 01-05-2011, 01:55 AM - Forum: The Game Everyone Loves To Play - Replies (4)

The full version of the theme for the anime The World God Only Knows:


Quote:What I'm seeing... is it real?

What I'm feeling... is it real?

What I'm doing... is it real?

There is no regrets, satisfy my curiosities

There is a new world waiting, explore my possibilities

There is no guarantee, just improve my abilities

(Go ahead with your own life - Is there any hope in your sight?)

There is a choice to make, setting the right priorities

(You will always be the one, so feel the power

And you should know the sun comes up - For you)

There is no regrets, satisfy my curiosities

There is a new world waiting, explore my possibilities

There is no guarantee, just improve my abilities

There is a choice to make, setting the right priorities

Chapter 2

(What is the best you can do? How can you do?)

I was sitting and thinking the other day

(What is the best you can do? How can you do?)

If I fail, I won't throw my passion away

(What is the best you can do? How can you do?)

Just 'cause giving up is not the only way

No matter how it's gonna be, I'll try it anyway

Chapter 3

Love is such a sweet illusion (Let's come together)

Can't seem to stop my imagination (Goes on forever)

What a ridiculous situation (Another matter)

But I can't deny, I'm faced with a tricky temptation

In the world that keeps on changing

Don't know why my heart is aching

Gotta handle it, no more hesitation

There can be no turning back

God only knows

"My mind is as free as the wind.

But now what I should do is to fall in love"

God only knows

"I don't need that kind of real things

Feels like I'm lost in the labyrinth"

God only knows

"There must be the meaning of life

Somehow unexpected happenings thrill me"

God only knows

"Just believe in myself and my dream

Anyone could be a hero and heroine"

God only knows

"Though it's not so easy to get through

Here I am, I'm sure that things will go my way"

God only knows

"My mind is as free as the wind.

But now what I should do is to fall in love"

God only knows (Your own happiness, you can find it)

"I don't need that kind of real things

Feels like I'm lost in the labyrinth"

God only knows (Your infinity, you can feel it)

"There must be the meaning of life

Somehow unexpected happenings thrill me"

God only knows (Opportunity, you can take it)

"Just believe in myself and my dream

Anyone could be a hero and heroine"

God only knows (Toward the future, you can make it)

"Though it's not so easy to get through

Here I am, I'm sure that things will go my way"

Chapter 4

(Sailing, you're sailing away

And now it's blowing, breeze will take you away)

I feel that my spirits rise

I will survive and just stay alive

Enjoy being alone, the isolation is not always so bad

Another day has gone by, every day goes by

In the sky there'd be a bridge to a bright tomorrow

(You will find your treasure and share your pleasure

Let me tell you...)

Chapter 5

(Just keep your vision, your dream and your soul alive

Be as you are, I will always be right by your side)

Think about my love and my life

In an uncertain world, face to face with myself

Continue to make progress, day by day and step by step

I've got a good feeling

So I'm gonna keep on trying, life will go on...
God only knows what this song might do, but, given the title and some of the lyrics, I'm pretty sure that Doug would examine the song in a Vetinari like fashion before actually playing it.
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Stand between the Silver Crystal and the Golden Sea.
"Youngsters these days just have no appreciation for the magnificence of the legendary cucumber."  --Krityan Elder, Tales of Vesperia.

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  Story detail request: Reunions 4
Posted by: Sofaspud - 01-05-2011, 12:09 AM - Forum: The Legendary - Replies (15)

I like incorporating other people's characters where I can, and in Reunions I'm drawing on a large cast already -- but there's one scene where I think I can tap the collective creativity of the group to better effect than relying on my own imagination.  So, I present you with an out-of-context snippet and a question:
If any of your characters were attending the party described below, and they chose to come as a villain, what villain would it be?

Quote:The Legendary base wasn't a nightclub or a bar, and it wasn't a
speakeasy or bistro or jazz hole or pub or tavern or restaurant or any
single one of these things.  It somehow managed to be all of them at
once without being tacky -- though privately thought the tiki
torches were a bit overkill -- and had a reputation as the spot
to hold a party, at least among its allies -- and if word on the street
was to be believed, among the general hero populace as well.  The D was
still the place to go, but if you couldn't get in or if you wanted
something a bit less exotic, the Legendary base was... legendary.
Tonight
was the annual Bring Your Own Villain party, something Mag Flashlight
and Pooky Da Imp had cooked up over beers, shrimp, and a
liquid-oxygen-fueled hibachi -- the former claiming strict sobriety and
complete innocence, the latter unable to recall events clearly but quite
certain that it had been a good idea at the time.  Perhaps
unsurprisingly, it had caught on, and there was much innuendo and barb
flying around at the choices those who had elected to be the villains
had made.  Some had thrown themselves into it wholeheartedly, some less
so, and then others...
blinked as Hamidon oozed by, and thought briefly that that had to be the most clever use of a
personal force field ever.
Let me know who the character is, and what villain -- doesn't have to be signature, can be their own personal nemesis or whatever.  Add a short description if you'd like.  I won't guarantee to use everyone but I'll be more than happy to try. Smile
(If you'd like to volunteer to be the Hamidon costume, feel free -- right now I have no idea who it is, but they've got screen time.)

--sofaspud
--"Listening to your kid is the audio equivalent of a Salvador Dali painting, Spud." --OpMegs

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