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Addventure attempts
Re: Addventure attempts
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As a rule of thumb anything that makes you feel like you need to take a breath to finish, even thou there is no comma is a run on sentence.
So she can surly be forgiven
Try turning some of those run on sentences into to seperate ones instead of drooping a few commas in, as they now seem greatly stilted and akward to read
Those who fear the darkness have never seen what the light can do.
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Addventure attempts - by CattyNebulart - 11-20-2006, 10:32 AM
Re: Addventure attempts - by happerry - 11-20-2006, 06:03 PM
Re: Addventure attempts - by CattyNebulart - 11-21-2006, 07:40 AM
Re: Addventure attempts - by Jenova Silverstar - 11-21-2006, 08:22 AM
Re: Addventure attempts - by CattyNebulart - 11-21-2006, 04:08 PM
Re: Addventure attempts - by happerry - 11-21-2006, 10:38 PM
Re: Addventure attempts - by CattyNebulart - 11-22-2006, 05:51 AM
Re: Addventure attempts - by happerry - 11-22-2006, 07:29 AM
Re: Addventure attempts - by CattyNebulart - 11-22-2006, 09:04 AM
Re: Addventure attempts - by happerry - 11-22-2006, 07:32 PM
Re: Addventure attempts - by CattyNebulart - 11-26-2006, 02:13 PM

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