Addventure attempts

[Happerry]

As a rule of thumb anything that makes you feel like you need to take a breath to finish, even thou there is no comma is a run on sentence.
So she can surly be forgiven
Try turning some of those run on sentences into to seperate ones instead of drooping a few commas in, as they now seem greatly stilted and akward to read
Those who fear the darkness have never seen what the light can do.