That's... wow.
That's amazingly precious.
I love that...
MASSIVE MASSIVE MASSIVE
GRITTY GRITTY GRITTY
BATTLE BATTLE BATTLE
small mundane concerns
*ping*
moment of transcendant beauty.
If your muse flows that way, I would love to see this as an ongoing story - or an ongoing metaseries - or both.
but don't force it. There's no way to ruin a story like this more effectively than forcing it.
That's amazingly precious.
I love that...
MASSIVE MASSIVE MASSIVE
GRITTY GRITTY GRITTY
BATTLE BATTLE BATTLE
small mundane concerns
*ping*
moment of transcendant beauty.
If your muse flows that way, I would love to see this as an ongoing story - or an ongoing metaseries - or both.
but don't force it. There's no way to ruin a story like this more effectively than forcing it.