I'm probably a very bad guide on how the personalities work out since I have only seen the first 10 eps of naruto, supplemented by a lot of fanfics.
Sakura saving Naruto seemed OOC until it was revealed that Sasuke was egging him on. That would give her the excuse in her own mind to save him. (Not that she would let him get to real harm, but if it's only pain/mild injuries she would let Naruto suffer.)
Sasuke seems actually right on target to me, so if you where tryting to mak him less intense... well maybe after we see more.
Naruto calling their teacher a pervert seems off. Keep in mind the 2 teacher Naruto calls perverts are Jiraiya, who is pretty much a legendary pervert, and Kakashi who reads porn pretty much the entire time. Without those experiences I doubt he would be that quick to insult Kabuto.
Also Kabuto's background is very different, is that the AU part of this story? Semi-reliable info: en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kabuto_Yakushi
E: "Did they... did they just endorse the combination of the JSDF and US Army by showing them as two lesbian lolicons moving in together and holding hands and talking about how 'intimate' they were?"
B: "Have you forgotten so soon? They're phasing out Don't Ask, Don't Tell."
Sakura saving Naruto seemed OOC until it was revealed that Sasuke was egging him on. That would give her the excuse in her own mind to save him. (Not that she would let him get to real harm, but if it's only pain/mild injuries she would let Naruto suffer.)
Sasuke seems actually right on target to me, so if you where tryting to mak him less intense... well maybe after we see more.
Naruto calling their teacher a pervert seems off. Keep in mind the 2 teacher Naruto calls perverts are Jiraiya, who is pretty much a legendary pervert, and Kakashi who reads porn pretty much the entire time. Without those experiences I doubt he would be that quick to insult Kabuto.
Also Kabuto's background is very different, is that the AU part of this story? Semi-reliable info: en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kabuto_Yakushi
E: "Did they... did they just endorse the combination of the JSDF and US Army by showing them as two lesbian lolicons moving in together and holding hands and talking about how 'intimate' they were?"
B: "Have you forgotten so soon? They're phasing out Don't Ask, Don't Tell."