Naruto fic seed (update 1)

[Acyl]

SkyeFire:

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Naruto: "You're one of those watchacallums, a Sadie-Hawkinist, one that enjoys torturing children!"
Sasuke:
Sakura: "That's Sado-Masochist, Naruto."
Naruto: "Isn't that what I said?"

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I have a solution to the "pervert problem", as it were - simply have Kabuto make the first move. That said...daaaamn, I like that exchange, and with your permission, I will use it.
Sure, 'Sadie Hawkins' is a little fourth-wall, being a cultural reference that shouldn't have any meaning in the Naruto world. Buuut...the actual Naruto series is full of such references anyway. =D
anowack:

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I'm tempted to say that no idea is inherently unworkable, but sadly I believe fanfiction.net has provided far too many contrary examples. This is definitely not one of those, though.

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Heh. Well, I think so too, really. That is, I think any concept's possible... it's not just the notion, it's the execution. You can take something really silly or cliche and spin a good story from it. Conversely, you can have a real good premise and run it into the ground with bad writing. I don't just mean bad prose, mind...but poor pacing, lousy structure, and so on. The thing about FF.net...is that many folks have terrible concepts and terrible writing, which doesn't really work.
As for titles...I'll figure out something. I'm not really thinking too hard, since I doubt I'll actually post this anywhere until I've got more of it actually written. Still getting the feel of the Naruto thing.
-- Acyl
(got the next immediate single scene completed - I'll post that tomorrow, if nothing else)
-- Acyl