A bit of plot whiplash here for me... I mean, Zeke was suppose to have graduated high school 2 years early and has gone to Japan for the college... now you
have him basically back in high school. That came out of nowhere for me. This is first mentioned in these scene version posts.... Also he places into
Usagi's mind level group of classes... which baffles me. You seem to have totally deleted large chucks of his back story to make this work.
"The Thousand-Yard Stare" comment also confuses me... Last time I check that doesn't happen until burn out and the endless nightmares set in.
Neither of which apply to Sosuke. His eyes would be doing regular sweeps of the area and/or darting around looking for things that indicate attack in progress
or booby trap. He doesn't have that affliction.... he doesn't blankly stare through people at something far in the distance no one else can see.
have him basically back in high school. That came out of nowhere for me. This is first mentioned in these scene version posts.... Also he places into
Usagi's mind level group of classes... which baffles me. You seem to have totally deleted large chucks of his back story to make this work.
"The Thousand-Yard Stare" comment also confuses me... Last time I check that doesn't happen until burn out and the endless nightmares set in.
Neither of which apply to Sosuke. His eyes would be doing regular sweeps of the area and/or darting around looking for things that indicate attack in progress
or booby trap. He doesn't have that affliction.... he doesn't blankly stare through people at something far in the distance no one else can see.