Okay, I do remember One Hundred Days, kinda sorta. So I did get something out of the recap. The thing the recap is missing is context... I'd like to see it framed in a way that its a (OHDs) internal canon recap or with hosts or something. More sensibly the first type. If you could phrase it as either a mission briefing for some involved character being brought up to speed or something like that it would work better for me. I'll probably end up rereading it now anyway. The current formatt is a whimsical info dump... which fails to meantion the reason it was called OHDs... the whole Sakura and Naruto remeet after a hundred days of training or something like that.
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