Sorry for the lack of answers, real life & my other story intruded.
For Silent's FFX snippet, outside a few grammar issues, pretty good. I see no real issue with what little FFX I can remember, and it's a good setup for future relationships in the story. Message me if you want a list of whatever grammar issue I could see.
BA, those 5 make sense to me, and I can see the Almighty having a plan and manipulating the stakes in the background.
1) Question however, is ATC's SWTG character part of this game, a prototype of this game, or something completely different?
2) Is this thing open to other characters (I care not about being actively represented or represented at all in your stories, just the concept itself.) ?
-People may die, but ideas are forever. Je suis Charlie.
For Silent's FFX snippet, outside a few grammar issues, pretty good. I see no real issue with what little FFX I can remember, and it's a good setup for future relationships in the story. Message me if you want a list of whatever grammar issue I could see.
BA, those 5 make sense to me, and I can see the Almighty having a plan and manipulating the stakes in the background.
1) Question however, is ATC's SWTG character part of this game, a prototype of this game, or something completely different?
2) Is this thing open to other characters (I care not about being actively represented or represented at all in your stories, just the concept itself.) ?
-People may die, but ideas are forever. Je suis Charlie.