Eh, there's four things I'd do.
One, tweak the Miscommunication In the Resistance Ships a little. It wasn't really needed, made Poe look a little too stupid, even with the bit at the end of it where he realizes that he's not the center of everything.
Two, keep in the version of the Finn/Phasma encounter where he calls her out on what a little bitch she really is. It's the real conclusion of his development from someone trying to flee a nightmare, to someone fighting for the only person to show him kindness, to someone fighting for something larger than himself.
Three, make it clearer just how much Snoke had to mess with Rey's head to make her give Kylo another chance while they were mindlinked. It'd make her going to Snokes ship work better, and her shaking off the last of it and remembering what a pathetic little mass murderer Kylo really is even better, but more painful.
Four, replace the hacker with someone more compelling, or at least have him Rewarded As A Traitor Deserves.
Other than that, I still prefer it to TFA.
Anyway, getting back on topic, have a couple of recommendations!
By The Stars That Shine From The Dawn (Fire Emblem: Three Houses/Okami)
A young Byleth meets a giant doG she names Ammy and brings home with her. Only one chapter so far, but it's adorable anyway. And when the inspiration is the worm/okami crossover Constellations, it's almost certain that the Monastery will be having Interesting Times in its future.
Paradoxical (Destiny/Worm)
During the campaign of the original game, a newly raised Guardian travels to the Reef, and meets a woman known as Weaver and her Ghost, Kali. A Risen with no ties to the Last City acting as the personal agent of Queen Mara Sov would be worrying enough, but then there's the matter of the other-dimensional creature her brain is linked to...
One, tweak the Miscommunication In the Resistance Ships a little. It wasn't really needed, made Poe look a little too stupid, even with the bit at the end of it where he realizes that he's not the center of everything.
Two, keep in the version of the Finn/Phasma encounter where he calls her out on what a little bitch she really is. It's the real conclusion of his development from someone trying to flee a nightmare, to someone fighting for the only person to show him kindness, to someone fighting for something larger than himself.
Three, make it clearer just how much Snoke had to mess with Rey's head to make her give Kylo another chance while they were mindlinked. It'd make her going to Snokes ship work better, and her shaking off the last of it and remembering what a pathetic little mass murderer Kylo really is even better, but more painful.
Four, replace the hacker with someone more compelling, or at least have him Rewarded As A Traitor Deserves.
Other than that, I still prefer it to TFA.
Anyway, getting back on topic, have a couple of recommendations!
By The Stars That Shine From The Dawn (Fire Emblem: Three Houses/Okami)
A young Byleth meets a giant doG she names Ammy and brings home with her. Only one chapter so far, but it's adorable anyway. And when the inspiration is the worm/okami crossover Constellations, it's almost certain that the Monastery will be having Interesting Times in its future.
Paradoxical (Destiny/Worm)
During the campaign of the original game, a newly raised Guardian travels to the Reef, and meets a woman known as Weaver and her Ghost, Kali. A Risen with no ties to the Last City acting as the personal agent of Queen Mara Sov would be worrying enough, but then there's the matter of the other-dimensional creature her brain is linked to...