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Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website
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...yeowza.
Damn good work, Mr. Schroeck, damn good work.
Case in point: I'd realized what Jennifer would be my first time through #13--the "-sp" designation and various comments made it sickeningly clear--
--but the revelatory scene still brought me perilously close to vomiting right here on the college library floor, and wouldn't that have been awkward?
(That was a compliment. No, really.)
I see you also put some stock in the Armstrong + Mason = Largo theory. Makes a lot of sense to me (and whatever canon may be, I'm dead certain that it's what the ADPF authors intended us to think).
OTOH, Armstrong G728 was a completely non-humanoid model, and you have Doug saying there doesn't seem to be such a thing. Or is that just another infonugget he missed?
Minor and possibly imaginary nitpick: while I also can't remember where the Tasmanian Devil's quote comes from, I'm convinced it's "Why for you...". (Might be multiple differing instances, especially considering Taz had his own daily 'toon for a while.)
Hmm... does the neurophage thing mean that the "telepathic" interchanges between Sylia and Largo are just plain radio transmissions? Amusing thought.
And on the "Who the Heck is Quincy" front...
...absolutely nothing.
Well done. Smile
--Sam Ashley
"This is what we call the 'denouement.' That's French for 'when we beat up the supervillain.'"
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Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Elsa Bibat - 11-14-2003, 06:03 PM
Comments on DWII - Chapter 14 - by Rod.H - 11-14-2003, 06:15 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by the kwp - 11-14-2003, 06:31 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Kokuten - 11-14-2003, 07:45 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Evil Midnight Lurker - 11-14-2003, 09:19 PM
Re: re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by cpt kangarooski - 11-15-2003, 01:48 AM
Re: re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Koryimran - 11-15-2003, 04:23 AM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Jeanne Hedge - 11-15-2003, 06:02 AM
Re: re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Ace Dreamer - 11-15-2003, 02:57 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Jeanne Hedge - 11-15-2003, 04:49 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Jeanne Hedge - 11-15-2003, 06:38 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Loki Laufeyjarson - 11-15-2003, 11:41 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Ace Dreamer - 11-16-2003, 02:07 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Loki Laufeyjarson - 11-16-2003, 04:59 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Ace Dreamer - 11-17-2003, 12:57 AM
Sick, sick, sick - by Bob Schroeck - 11-18-2003, 05:42 PM
Regarding computer bits... - by Logan Darklighter - 11-18-2003, 08:22 PM
Re: Chapter 14 - by Murmur the Fallen - 11-21-2003, 01:08 AM
Re: Chapter 14 - by Offsides - 11-21-2003, 05:05 AM
Re: Chapter 14 - by Bob Schroeck - 11-21-2003, 05:09 PM
Duhh . . . Nope, nope, nope - by Murmur the Fallen - 11-22-2003, 11:08 AM
Re: Duhh . . . Nope, nope, nope - by Ace Dreamer - 11-22-2003, 02:11 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Elsa Bibat - 11-24-2003, 12:37 PM
Re: Duhh . . . Nope, nope, nope - by Bob Schroeck - 11-26-2003, 08:28 AM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by WengFook - 12-16-2003, 07:25 AM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by WengFook - 12-16-2003, 02:28 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by WengFook - 12-17-2003, 02:44 PM

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