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Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website
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re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website
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11-14-2003, 10:04 PM
Very good.
Only one minor nit, but it's only my opinion.
I keep parsing 'fangirl' as 'fang girl'.
Perhaps a hypen would fix this.
fan-boy
fan-girl
fan-child?
fan-booma?
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Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Elsa Bibat - 11-14-2003, 06:03 PM
Comments on DWII - Chapter 14 - by Rod.H - 11-14-2003, 06:15 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by the kwp - 11-14-2003, 06:31 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Kokuten - 11-14-2003, 07:45 PM
re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by itsune9tl - 11-14-2003, 10:04 PM
Re: re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by cpt kangarooski - 11-15-2003, 01:48 AM
Re: re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Koryimran - 11-15-2003, 04:23 AM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Jeanne Hedge - 11-15-2003, 06:02 AM
Re: re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Ace Dreamer - 11-15-2003, 02:57 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Jeanne Hedge - 11-15-2003, 04:49 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Jeanne Hedge - 11-15-2003, 06:38 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Loki Laufeyjarson - 11-15-2003, 11:41 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Ace Dreamer - 11-16-2003, 02:07 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Loki Laufeyjarson - 11-16-2003, 04:59 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Ace Dreamer - 11-17-2003, 12:57 AM
Sick, sick, sick - by Bob Schroeck - 11-18-2003, 05:42 PM
Regarding computer bits... - by Logan Darklighter - 11-18-2003, 08:22 PM
Re: Chapter 14 - by Murmur the Fallen - 11-21-2003, 01:08 AM
Re: Chapter 14 - by Offsides - 11-21-2003, 05:05 AM
Re: Chapter 14 - by Bob Schroeck - 11-21-2003, 05:09 PM
Duhh . . . Nope, nope, nope - by Murmur the Fallen - 11-22-2003, 11:08 AM
Re: Duhh . . . Nope, nope, nope - by Ace Dreamer - 11-22-2003, 02:11 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Elsa Bibat - 11-24-2003, 12:37 PM
Re: Duhh . . . Nope, nope, nope - by Bob Schroeck - 11-26-2003, 08:28 AM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by WengFook - 12-16-2003, 07:25 AM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by WengFook - 12-16-2003, 02:28 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by WengFook - 12-17-2003, 02:44 PM

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