Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website

[Bob Schroeck]

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Nicely done, Bob. I really couldn't find anything wrong with it on the first read. I caught up with what Jennifer was about a minute or two before the denouement

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I'd been wondering if I'd overplayed my hand or not on that detail. Given that most people seem to have been caught by surprise, I'd say I didn't over-foreshadow it.

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Looking forward to the final chapter. It'll be, to paraphrase the Bunny, a lulu.

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I'm hoping everyone will think it lives up to the build up. But I can't help but get worried and second guess myself...

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Oh, and "Wake up; time to die!" was said by Brion James

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Thanks for the correction. I've made the revision to the concordance, but haven't posted it to the site yet.


-- Bob
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"Flan on!" -- The battlecry of the Human Dessert