Right... I think it's done. I just need to hear back from Foxboy about Captain Corcoran... I tried to get his voice right, and keep the conversation short, assuming he was in a hurry with his passengers. He tells them a little about Stellvia and The Island, and asks what they're doing in a military ship. Hopefully I got him right.. If you want to edit anything, I can share the document with you.
Stellvia, well... somebody shows up armed in orbit, they take an interest and see just who they are. And I thought I'd have some fun with the Athacrew's newbieness and Kelly.
If nobody objects to anything they do, I'll add them and their ship to the wiki soon.
One little thing, I'm trying to keep them as ordinary fen, whose only distinction is what they launched into orbit aboard, and it's a distinction that fades very quickly. And comes back to bite them in the ass later.
Also, the one holding the camera is my author avatar, whether anything becomes of that I don't know. Though he's the sort of guy who'll pour the leftovers of a handwavium strain capable of making a Knight Saber hardsuit, into an empty Guinness bottle nearby that he's just emptied, and leave it where it could be mistaken from an actual Guinness bottle.
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Stellvia, well... somebody shows up armed in orbit, they take an interest and see just who they are. And I thought I'd have some fun with the Athacrew's newbieness and Kelly.
If nobody objects to anything they do, I'll add them and their ship to the wiki soon.
One little thing, I'm trying to keep them as ordinary fen, whose only distinction is what they launched into orbit aboard, and it's a distinction that fades very quickly. And comes back to bite them in the ass later.
Also, the one holding the camera is my author avatar, whether anything becomes of that I don't know. Though he's the sort of guy who'll pour the leftovers of a handwavium strain capable of making a Knight Saber hardsuit, into an empty Guinness bottle nearby that he's just emptied, and leave it where it could be mistaken from an actual Guinness bottle.
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--m(^0^)m-- Wot, no sig?