I was trying something different. I'm glad you liked it. I don't typically write this way, but I figured I'd give it a shot. Probably needs a bit
of work.
That said, there's one element that's an established thing in my writing - when I do fight scenes, I don't usually describe the physical actions of
each character or their relative positions in great detail. Most of the prose concentrates on describing particular sensations and certain bits I want to
emphasise rather than a full blow-by-blow account. There's very little actual choreography - that's left to imagination.
-- Acyl
of work.
That said, there's one element that's an established thing in my writing - when I do fight scenes, I don't usually describe the physical actions of
each character or their relative positions in great detail. Most of the prose concentrates on describing particular sensations and certain bits I want to
emphasise rather than a full blow-by-blow account. There's very little actual choreography - that's left to imagination.
-- Acyl