I'm thinking it'd be possible, for Terrence...to effectively rotate the torso by shifting most of the chest and t-shirt lines to the left. Redrawing some of 'em, but that shouldn't be too onorous. Could add more muscle definition at the same time. Redrawing the biceps and shoulder bits past the forearm wrappings shouldn't be too hard either. All of that should fix some of the issues, and make him look wider and bulkier to boot.
As I mentioned, I'm not so good at drawing heavily built physical proportions, and perspective is kinda a hit-and-miss game. The feedback's valuable, thus...I also didn't realise how extreme the arm looked when taken with the figure as a whole, so it's good that you folks pointed it out. =D
Regarding the glasses on Rhea - I'll make a decision when I get to inking her.
For Marcus and Space...I'm not satisfied with the faces on either actually. Aside from the stubble on Marcus. Else I know what you mean...but I can't think of a quick-fix...perhaps a touch more shading, but I dunno. For Marcus the head is basically just awkward 'cause of the cowboy hat, really...I drew the head around the hat, not the other way around, because hats are a new and alien territory for me in the uncharted realms of here be haberdashery. =( But the pose, yeah, the pose was the main thing really. Glad that worked.
-- Acyl
As I mentioned, I'm not so good at drawing heavily built physical proportions, and perspective is kinda a hit-and-miss game. The feedback's valuable, thus...I also didn't realise how extreme the arm looked when taken with the figure as a whole, so it's good that you folks pointed it out. =D
Regarding the glasses on Rhea - I'll make a decision when I get to inking her.
For Marcus and Space...I'm not satisfied with the faces on either actually. Aside from the stubble on Marcus. Else I know what you mean...but I can't think of a quick-fix...perhaps a touch more shading, but I dunno. For Marcus the head is basically just awkward 'cause of the cowboy hat, really...I drew the head around the hat, not the other way around, because hats are a new and alien territory for me in the uncharted realms of here be haberdashery. =( But the pose, yeah, the pose was the main thing really. Glad that worked.
-- Acyl