Minor beta-ing bits:
- a few spelling errors, lkely typos. Easy enough to ignore, and not enough to pick through, but it might be worth running a spellchecker.
- (from the microwave: how much it takes to make an energon cube) kilowatts are a measure of power. Energy is measured in kilowatt-hours. You probably want to do a search on kilowatt to make sure you can fix all of the references.
FWIW, I find myself occasionally rereading the Saving Shuko scene, just for the warm fuzzies. I love that bit where he spools himself up to heroism. Love I say! Love!
- a few spelling errors, lkely typos. Easy enough to ignore, and not enough to pick through, but it might be worth running a spellchecker.
- (from the microwave: how much it takes to make an energon cube) kilowatts are a measure of power. Energy is measured in kilowatt-hours. You probably want to do a search on kilowatt to make sure you can fix all of the references.
FWIW, I find myself occasionally rereading the Saving Shuko scene, just for the warm fuzzies. I love that bit where he spools himself up to heroism. Love I say! Love!