Looks good to me, too.
Since Helen's a normal girl (at least until she hits puberty and a variant of her mother's biomod manifests), she'd have to be at least six years old in this scene. She may be as old as eight. So it'd be set in 2021-2023...
(Either way, her nanny/tutor/bodyguard Yomiko would be along for the trip, but not present during the training session unless she's invited to take part. I recall the Jason having a Yomiko on staff, too - R. Yomiko Readman and H. Yomiko Readman could be comparing notes somewhere else on Yggdrasil at the time.)
--
Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."
- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012
Since Helen's a normal girl (at least until she hits puberty and a variant of her mother's biomod manifests), she'd have to be at least six years old in this scene. She may be as old as eight. So it'd be set in 2021-2023...
(Either way, her nanny/tutor/bodyguard Yomiko would be along for the trip, but not present during the training session unless she's invited to take part. I recall the Jason having a Yomiko on staff, too - R. Yomiko Readman and H. Yomiko Readman could be comparing notes somewhere else on Yggdrasil at the time.)
--
Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."
- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012