On closer examination (and in color, which helps, dunno why), myself, Julia (my wife), and Uni have all independently reached the same conclusion: Terr is a
gorilla.
Er, wait, no that's not it.
Terr's right arm is too long, we think. As drawn, the wrist line appears to be on the same level as the bottom of Terr's crotch*, which -- using
myself and two other guys we know as a model -- is inaccurate. The fingers or fingertips line up on that level, in that pose; not the wrist..
In addition, and this might just be me, the hand looks to be too large. Granted it fades out just past the wrist, but looking at it and projecting the lines,
it seems to me that Terr's hand would reach to his knee and be able to span a good-sized dinner plate.
It also occurred to me that, if drawing the arm is a problem, you could always hide it behind Lisa, much the same as Terr's other arm is hidden behind
Rhea. Because, dude, you've got the girls *nailed*, in my opinion.
At any rate, the problem is not a show-stopper by any means, but I get the impression you prefer honest critiques, so I'm offering it in that vein.
(* gah, there's a phrase I never thought I'd type)
--sofaspud
--"Listening to your kid is the audio equivalent of a Salvador Dali painting, Spud." --OpMegs
gorilla.
Er, wait, no that's not it.
Terr's right arm is too long, we think. As drawn, the wrist line appears to be on the same level as the bottom of Terr's crotch*, which -- using
myself and two other guys we know as a model -- is inaccurate. The fingers or fingertips line up on that level, in that pose; not the wrist..
In addition, and this might just be me, the hand looks to be too large. Granted it fades out just past the wrist, but looking at it and projecting the lines,
it seems to me that Terr's hand would reach to his knee and be able to span a good-sized dinner plate.
It also occurred to me that, if drawing the arm is a problem, you could always hide it behind Lisa, much the same as Terr's other arm is hidden behind
Rhea. Because, dude, you've got the girls *nailed*, in my opinion.
At any rate, the problem is not a show-stopper by any means, but I get the impression you prefer honest critiques, so I'm offering it in that vein.
(* gah, there's a phrase I never thought I'd type)
--sofaspud
--"Listening to your kid is the audio equivalent of a Salvador Dali painting, Spud." --OpMegs